Beginnings - JESUS (11/15)

[unwritten_ideas]

Title - Beginnings - JESUS (11/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part PG-13Word Count - 4,146 (69,000ish total

Comments

[saurgristiel]

You keep wowing me. Your update days are my favorite days ^_^. Wednesday is SO far away...

This chapter was really nice (before the seriousness, which is a different kind of good). I really like fics about the slower times in G's life. I really love how you are writing their transitioning relationship ^_^

There are a couple of errors you missed before you posted it. You're smart enough to find them ^^

[unwritten_ideas]

Yes, I like stories that are set around just regular days and occurrences. This part and the previous one, with the poker game, are my two favourites I think.

Thanks for reading.

[onixant]

yup! I liked this chapter. moreover, with a few words from Gackt at the last moment. I love you Gackt. Wins this game, hahaha. oh finally ...

[onixant]

oh, additional comments. I like the content of this chapter (place, chat, hug and kiss that is very romantic and sooo sweeeetttt....) I read this chapter over and over and fantasize. haha ..

[unwritten_ideas]

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!

Thank you for reading.

[love_teddies]

yes yes. progress finally.
chacha's the wise one

[unwritten_ideas]

Everyone should always listen to Chacha.

Thanks for reading!

[nihon_hamano]

I went WTH?! out loud at "But then, You was kissing him.", soooo... totally wasn't expecting that XD but I think it's good that You is starting to slip now, if we're ever going to get to that NC-17 before the last chapter ;)

I knew that last sentence was going to pop up again!

[unwritten_ideas]

It's okay. Gackt wasn't expecting it either.

I promise it gets to NC-17 at some point. Promise!

[nicolle2020]

Woooow! that was so...unexpected! XD
I've shout 'Jesus' when You was kissing him...
-That's progress! =)
Can wait until wednesday >w<

[unwritten_ideas]

It is progress! I think...

Nearly Wednesday!