Beginnings - 小悪魔ヘヴン (15/15)

Jun 11, 2011 21:30

Title - Beginnings - 小悪魔ヘヴン (15/15)
Author - unwritten_ideas
Beta - write_my_dreams
Rating - eventual NC-17, this part NC-17Word Count - 7,251 (69,000ish total ( Read more... )

character : chacha, rating : nc-17, pairing : gackt x you, story : beginnings, character : gackt, character : junji, character : chirolyn, character : you

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love_teddies June 12 2011, 12:32:28 UTC
“I’m fired. We’re all fired. You’re changing your music style and recording an enka album. We’re doing the show naked. You really are a vampire, and we’re all your sacrifices.”
-LOL- especially at the vampire part

awwwww. this fic is so good. ENCORE! ENCORE!ENCORE!

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unwritten_ideas June 12 2011, 13:14:20 UTC
I love Jun-ji. He's such fun to write.

Thank you for reading! I doubt there will be any encores of this though :-/

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mind_cell June 13 2011, 09:50:58 UTC
I don't understand why you keep saying you fail at writing smut. :) Maybe it's difficult for you to write it but what results from your writing pains is very-very smutty and simultaneously realistic. I absolutely love how meaningful each sex scene in this fic is. It's so true that sex is not a thing, and you wove it seamlessly into your plot.

This first time was very beautifully written.

I have a question though. Do you think that in RL Gackt would have announced his relationship like that, to the whole crew? I think he would have had to share it with his band members, but all the staff.. Hm, don't even know. Maybe it makes sense for him to be the first to tell this to others bc such things tend to get noticed and tongues begin to wag pretty quickly... On the other hand, the more people know, the bigger the chance that this relationship will become known to general public - and as far as i understand, Japan still has pretty traditional views on homosexual relationships... Would be interesting to know what you think about it ( ... )

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unwritten_ideas June 13 2011, 12:08:41 UTC
Smut takes ten times as long to write than anything else. That's why I don't do it very often and when I do, I like to tell a story with it ( ... )

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onixant June 14 2011, 05:27:27 UTC
"Training? I think I'd rather watch you guys make out. "yes, I also agree with Chirolyn, haha.
Gackt once said in Utaban if he likes sex up to 7-8 hours? I think the story is less romantic hot.
but at least I still like the story to end. and I hope there are sequel or extra story, haha.
gay are generally more like one night stand. but in Asia and the lovers stories gay (not lesbian), always pretending to tell a gay relationship with their partner, like a natural story heterosexual romantic in general. but for me, I prefer the gay romantic story than one night stand.
P.S. when to create a new story? I will continue to follow.
thank you for reading, I'm just kidding, I mean thank you has made ​​the story.

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unwritten_ideas June 15 2011, 15:39:58 UTC
One night stands can be difficult to write if the characters know each other as well as Gackt and You do...

Thank you for reading and for commenting! I'm working on some other stories. Hopefully you'll see them soon.

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onixant June 16 2011, 06:50:42 UTC
yep! I will wait for it

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souls_ebola August 4 2012, 22:15:43 UTC
Love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your writing is superb. I can't think of a better way to characterize Gackt xD

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unwritten_ideas August 8 2012, 16:50:57 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you've enjoyed reading!

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