The First Empty Room

[unwritten_poet]

The first empty room,

I know it’s nothing in

comparison to what

has happened, I know

it’s just furniture, but

that blue couch was the only

one that never saw…

anything. Except physics

homework and guitars

and making out.

Standing in the doorway of

the gutted room, breathing

slighty off beat, I keep

my safe distance, I refuse

to enter, perhaps

Comments

[sicklecell]

yeah, moving sucks =(.

[jesusfreak13]

from what i got from this...ur dad came and got some of his stuff, including that blue couch that no one seems to sit on very often unless the house is spilling over with people. i dont want ur mother to walk in and see that and cry. i want her to be happy.

good interpretive skills, young lady!

[unwritten_poet]

yeah, he took the front room furniture--but all this happened like, a week or so ago; that's when I wrote this.

[verbal_satori]

dude, if your dad stole the furniture, he really needs a life.

[unwritten_poet]

no no no, he didn't steal it. they divided it up. he got the front room furniture, and mom got the tv room furniture.

[verbal_satori]

oh, ok. i thought you were talking about the living room furniture, for some reason.