Black Cat Ch.18

[upnabout]

Tittle: Black Cat
Author: up and about (upnabout) 
Band(s): alice nine, Lycaon, Aicle (Other bands in this chapter)
Pairings/ characters: HirotoXShou, ToraXSaga, Nao, Yuuki, EmiruXSaran (through out)
Genre: MalexMale/ Life/ Prostitution
Disclaimer: I own nothing~ But the fic is mine T.T
Chapter: 18
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Prostitution/ MalexMale

Comments

[iscreamboo]

I teared up... D'awwwwehh! Even though Hiroto got fired, this chapter was so cute!

[upnabout]

Thank you so much >W< ah, i'm not really good at writing when it comes to feelings and 'expressing' so i'm happy you liked it \(^-^\)

[chimei_tekina]

Oh my gazette thank u soooooo much for this chapter! Ots everything i needed. Im so happy hiroto finally understands!!!!!!!

[upnabout]

>w< No thank you~! yeah me too! Let's see how their attitude towards each other changers after this chapter~~

[kimi_no_emi]

Oh my! That's it!!! Ooohhh sooo many emotions *OOO* sadness mixed with happiness is so awesome!! ** This chapter is something else, I love it ** It is so big and wonderful *O*
The scene in the empty class is so warm~ Their lunch ^^ Shou's fighting, and final scene, honestly, it made me cry too :"D But the end is comforting, I feel peaceful, thank you so much *3*
Shou's drawing is kawaii :D
Ow and congrats with having a beta! I guess, it's kind of a new level for the story and your writing, isn't it? ^^

[upnabout]

This comment makes me feel really happy, actually. it fills me with joy that my writing could make you feel peaceful ^^ AH! Isn't shou a great artist (ish kidding) Well i wouldn't say a new level. It just bothered me that i had so many mistakes, And they were really easy for me to miss since i had read the story over so many times, i really couldn't see them any more =3= Alrighty~ i want to start on the new chapter~ It'll be fun writing this one >)

[kimi_no_emi]

Now not only the story is awesome, but also the way it have written *3*
Oh the fact that you want to start new sounds like a music for my ears *3* well.. for my eyes.. I don't know :DD I'm very glad, that's it :D

[atearak]

WOW this went on even more!
*w* and you mentioned me! that's so sweet (>w<)/
(let me just read it and then i'll post a decent comment on the chapter xD)

[atearak]

how don't you know what this chapter is? the emotions are so greatly joint! shou's speach was so strong, the second half had such a huge impact on me

it was amazing, really ;)

[upnabout]

I guess it's because it didn't turn out the way i wanted it to. YAY! That really means a lot because writing emotionally is really hard for me =3=
wow, that also really means a lot to me, i didn't know my writing would ever be able to do that. And of course i would mention you! You were a great help =3
Thank you so much!!

[atearak]

i guess that' just the way it is xD stories dont usually end up strictly how we plan it, they live and have their own will, just like living beings~
yeah, whenever i write something, i never know if i approach emotions the right way x_x i think you only know it when someone assesses your writing.

dont refrain from asking me for help ^w^ i really enjoyed helping you, i could have corrected the last half, please dont think you're bothering me~

[upnabout]

Okay~ i always feel like i'm annoying people but from now on, when i need help i'll be sure to ask you ^^