placid eyes

[upsetmyheart]

with a glance,
i am thrown to the floor.
all diction surpasses time.

placid eyes, brimming,
wet my jaw
and erase my scars.
converting...
hoary pink, 
smooth tissue...childlike.
plump,
radiant,
demure.

Comments

[stupastu]

wet my jaw
and erase my scars

That hit me hard.

[upsetmyheart]

good. ;)

[upsetmyheart]

i always love to receive a message from you, dear. (dear, said the way a grandma says it to her grandchild)! haha. i am always smiling, encouraged or laughing after your replies.

[upsetmyheart]

just wow, huh? hahah. i say that too, and my friends laugh at me. but it means exactly what it's supposed to, wow! right?!

[upsetmyheart]

sure is, schnookems...now go get grandma her cane, like a nice wittle girl!

[upsetmyheart]

hey--do you have a facebook or a myspace? then i can keep up with you better and the whole world isn't reading my advice and stuff to you about daniel, etc.

[autumnsea]

You have such a wonderful way with words ...

I love these lines:

placid eyes, brimming,
wet my jaw
and erase my scars.

I can feel those words so much.

[upsetmyheart]

thank you kindly.