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[upsetmyheart]

all_unwritten has proved itself as my source of mind-provocation; here i find the tip of a thought or feeling i can run with...

eyes tire from this reading;
your excuses.
premeditated,
rehearsed...
intricate lies
entrap hearts in heated rage.
where have you learned
such craft;
such finesse
in coos
and limericks?
these flawless
misreadings
swirl thoughts atop

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[stupastu]

After the phrase "intricate lies" this piece really takes off, it rises, elevates, flies.

entrap hearts in heated rage.
where have you learned
such craft;

I think my own heart was snagged there.

[upsetmyheart]

my poetry goal: to snag your heart. ;) thanks, friend.

[i_just_float]

this is beyond clever...
thank you.

::applause::

[upsetmyheart]

i appreciate that. thank you.