your tears will drown me...

Aug 01, 2007 14:30


baby, don't cry.
your tears will drown me.
i hear your sobs, your emotion...
i feel it on my skin, in my mouth.
it fills my lungs and takes my air.
i cannot breathe.
your tears have plunged me into suffocation.
baby, don't cry.
your tears will drown me.
do you feel me?
my feeble hand reaches out to you.
your vision is blurred.
you cannot see my movement.
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dearsergeo August 12 2007, 22:16:04 UTC
there's so much behind everything you write, i am so amazed....and i truly have never been so moved by another person's words...you are truly inspiring to me and i dont even know you....

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upsetmyheart August 12 2007, 22:24:37 UTC
ah, you commented on this piece. thank you. this meant so much to me when i wrote, it still does. and my God, thank you forever for what you have said to me about my writing. i can't even tell you what it means to me.

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