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Apr 11, 2007 00:50

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dove_cry April 24 2007, 03:30:41 UTC
I enjoyed this. I like writing where the narrator seems as though he or she is arguing with him/herself. I like how you themed it. Ending writing with a very short line seems to be more powerful. Good job.

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uptosummat April 24 2007, 03:42:52 UTC
thank you for telling me what you think. :D

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