mooore drabble

[uptosummat]

Title: That Song
Fandom: Skins
Rating: PG
Word Count: 144

Comments

[uptosummat]

yeah it's too late to change it because voting has already started. but i like it ending where it does, so i wouldn't change it anyway.

[dove_cry]

I like it. I think it's well written with an eerie ending. I especially like the way he got up and didn't care that he got mud and grass stains all over him, that all he concentrated on was how he lost her. "He kissed the cold stone and walked away" definitely maintains the mood of the story and I can picture the scene as if it were in a movie.

[uptosummat]

thanks for commenting/reviewing it!