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[uptosummat]

Title:what she needs
Word Count: 149

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girl severely beaten and raped; attacker evades police

that was the newSpaper headline the morning after the police found racHel floating in the river. alivEshe was walking home from school when he took her. pulled her into a va

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[dove_cry]

not to bother you, but i have a quick question about words_challenge

do you think that if i'm "implying" a mature subject, that it should really be given a mature rating? Take rape for example; it's a violent topic but if the word is never actually written, do you think it has to be given a rating based on violence? because i was thinking, maybe if people are too young to read about this kind of content, then maybe they're too young to even realize what is being implied...? maybe? I'm not really sure how to rate my stories.

[uptosummat]

well, i rated my rape one PG13 but it said rape in it so that would be why. i think yours would be fine if you wanted to do PG. if someone's too young to read about it then yeah, they won't realize what is being implied.

[anonymous]

don't mind me, i have a habit of commentign on things in communitiies. i thougth it was a good story but the letters kind of take attention off ur writing. people should be voting for what your writing not the hidden message you put in there.

[uptosummat]

the hidden message is part of the writing though...