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[ur2own4disaster]

shards of glass on a dirty floor

clear invisible barely there

hords of people crush and shatter you with their sneakers

you lie broken in pieces on the floor

invisible to all who go by

your pain invisible to all who hurt you

then comes the bare foot boy

kind gentle caring

he walks harmlessly

his once soft smooth feet

now cut and gashed

blood

Comments

[xexoticsoulx]

could you not get close

was it fear of more pain

that part was accurate according to me. but don't blame her, youd've done the same if...the things had happened to you. but, nobody thinks i know what i'm talking about because i'm *not sposed to know* alot of things. but i do. and, i've learned that the ability to trust without doubt can be regained. wow i sound like im trying to be all deep. sorry bout that but it's true. lol, love. *Kaela* ¿?

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[ur2own4disaster]

uh ok lol
yea uh very deep...?:\ lol um i think that that wasnt completely necissarilly about a certain person like ur thinking ♥ lol love ya _-_-_-_- ♥

hehe

[punkybrewster23]

your poem was so...wait, I'll find a word...squirrel-y. That's a real word...kind of Except for the fact that I made it up…but don’t worry, it’s a compliment… Oh, and i like ur user pic.

[xliexxforxxyoux]

Thank you I think squirley is DEFINTELY THE BEST WORD EVER actually not the best word... that would be______ any way uh this is zak's other lj lol thanx

♥~zak~♥

[xdiexxforxxyoux]

tell me who you are.

or i'll come and stab you. Thanks. :)

[xliexxforxxyoux]

Hey trey... this is zak and the lj you commented on is my other username....yeah if your confused i "went to the movies" with you stewart julian anna kaela uh kinga um and some other people once lol

~zak~