I ended up trashing the entire thing and starting from scratch. But here it is...finally. And for some reason my picture's not posting--which sucks because the relevance was ASTOUNDING. :)
who is kat, why do you write her so well? why do you do anything at all other than write this story? Are you that perfect at other things as well? thank you, loved it. can't wait for more.
It was absolutely fantastic as always!! I'm still loving the casual banter and conversation between Ashley and Spencer. But I love how at the exact same time, they're getting to know each other and figuring each other out by reading between the lines. I agree that Ashley should try dating.. and I think by doing that, she's going to start showing Spencer more of her vulnerable side.. which I think.. will lead to feelingsfeelingsfeelings!!! =DD Kat.. is just ughh.. haha.. Kyla is a little witty son of a bitch.. I like her. =P Please post more soon! =)
People shouldn't be forced to deal with ANYTHING until they've had coffee! Yeah, this all sucks for Ashley, but since she's still convincing herself that all of her feelings toward Spencer are just nostalgia-based, what can she do?
Yearbook? What yearbook? :) I obviously can't come out and tell you how long Robin will be around, but as a hint: you're not close to the end. How's that?
We agree on coffee. Coffee is a gift from the gods!
Ashley will wake up soon and realize she is still in love, or so I hope after she goes on a few dates and realizes no one compares.
As far as Robin, ugh! I'm just going to hope Spencer's "crush" doesn't turn into love. That would totally ruin it for me, but it's your story, so I'm following along since I can't seem to stop myself.
On a side note, I finished Dennison House, since I had told you I would read it on ff. (hphglover there) Let me tell you, girl, I didn't sleep well that night because I coudn't stop thinking about it. I never once saw the ending coming and I was so mad at Ashey! I didn't even read the second part. I need some time before I can go there, so I'll try the other story first!
It's a three-part story, right? And from the looks of it, this part has to be at least 12 chapters or so. Possibly more. So, there's a lot of time for me to develop this at a slow, thorough pace--this includes Robin's role in the story. Look at it this way, Robin is going to be a tool in both Spencer and Ashley's development. Separately and together. But this is a SPASHLEY story. I've written stories with controversial endings--as I'll get to in a sec--but never where someone else ends up with either of them.
Now, "The Dennison House." Yeah, it's a ride and a stressful one at that. Hope you're still an urbankazoos follower despite the immense torture ;)
Oh, I just hate that for Ashley. But then again, she's being introduced to what it feels like to be on the other side. (And I don't mean like in high school. I mean like seeing more than a one night stand.) Uh, I just feel sick that Spencer slept with Robin with Ashley there. I wasn't happy when Ashley did it, but Spencer likes this girl. UGH
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Glad you picked up on that line. And hold onto it, because it's definitely going to be relevant later.
I'm glad everyone seems to like Ashley's friends. I think it probably makes Jonica's presence in this story a little easier to handle, huh? And I'm definitely going to use them as much as I can because I like them too. It's a nice change of pace in the writing.
I wish I posted more than once a week too, but alas, my schedule just doesn't allow for it. :(
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And I'm perfect at one thing--playing the kazoo.
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UPDATE!!!
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I'm still loving the casual banter and conversation between Ashley and Spencer.
But I love how at the exact same time, they're getting to know each other and figuring each other out by reading between the lines.
I agree that Ashley should try dating.. and I think by doing that, she's going to start showing Spencer more of her vulnerable side.. which I think.. will lead to feelingsfeelingsfeelings!!! =DD
Kat.. is just ughh.. haha..
Kyla is a little witty son of a bitch.. I like her. =P
Please post more soon! =)
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And I'm glad you like Kyla. I like the contrast between she and Kat.
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Yearbook? What yearbook? :) I obviously can't come out and tell you how long Robin will be around, but as a hint: you're not close to the end. How's that?
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Ashley will wake up soon and realize she is still in love, or so I hope after she goes on a few dates and realizes no one compares.
As far as Robin, ugh! I'm just going to hope Spencer's "crush" doesn't turn into love. That would totally ruin it for me, but it's your story, so I'm following along since I can't seem to stop myself.
On a side note, I finished Dennison House, since I had told you I would read it on ff. (hphglover there) Let me tell you, girl, I didn't sleep well that night because I coudn't stop thinking about it. I never once saw the ending coming and I was so mad at Ashey! I didn't even read the second part. I need some time before I can go there, so I'll try the other story first!
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Now, "The Dennison House." Yeah, it's a ride and a stressful one at that. Hope you're still an urbankazoos follower despite the immense torture ;)
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I'm glad everyone seems to like Ashley's friends. I think it probably makes Jonica's presence in this story a little easier to handle, huh? And I'm definitely going to use them as much as I can because I like them too. It's a nice change of pace in the writing.
I wish I posted more than once a week too, but alas, my schedule just doesn't allow for it. :(
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