I'm Back...

[urbankazoos]

I got back from camp Thursday evening but woke up the next day feeling epically ill. I think I caught some sort of bug that was going around camp. So excuse my tardiness with this chapter but I couldn't work on it like I wanted without feeling the need to slam my head between two bricks. Oh--and instead of a basic volunteer camp position, they

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[willowon3]

welcome back n glad in 1 piece hihi. thanks for the update and a brilliant chapter. the exchange between 'monica' and ashley was inevitable and intense but well, absolutely satisfying hee. glad u made ashley the annoying n witty party. still not telling what was jonica's deal huh. no matter, sooner or later u will spill...eventually hee. lets see if spencer recognizes kat when they finally meet and who knows, kat might jog her memory abt ashley without hvg to look thru the yearbook. somehow last line was very meaningful n sad. actually most of her in-between-the-line statements squeezed in her conversation with spencer were. that makes me kinda feel for her. getting more interesting by the chapter. u shd write a book, ur writing is novelworthy. next pls!! hee
btw, I'm impressed by ur culinary ability :)

Re: ashley 1 jonica 0

[urbankazoos]

Thank you, thank you. Back in one piece, indeed!

Glad you liked the chapter. Definitely you'll start understanding more about where Jonica's coming from as the story progresses and also, there's the inevitable Kat/Spencer meeting. There's a chance she'll jog Spencer's memory but you'll just have to wait and see!

I appreciate the compliment, but if I don't have time to update this any more than I do, I doubt I have time to commit to writing a novel!

Sorry so long.. llol

[befri44]

Glad you're back darlin!
I def missed your story!
And that was a pretty sweet opportunity that you were given. =)
But the post was awesome!
Ashley totally got Monica.. I mean Jonica.. xP
Was Ashley really flirting with her before Jonica called her on it?
I mean either way the fight was priceless.. I don't, however, like how she was rude to Spencer. Jonica may have an impression of Jonica.. but she shouldn't judge her best friend off of her own impressions.
Spencer knows Ashley, even if it's still at the primary level and not a deep one. But at least it's more than Jonica knows or thinks of Ashley.
And I'm SOOO glad Ashley finally told Spencer! Now I can't wait to get inside Ash's head next and see what she's thinking now that Spencer knows! =)
And I can't wait to see when the rest of that secret is spilled! lol
Post more soon! Anxiously waiting. =)

Re: Sorry so long.. llol

[urbankazoos]

It was a fantastic opportunity! Tiring, but fantastic.

The dynamics of the Spencer/Jonica friendship are really strange in this story and I encourage people to pay close attention to them. But indeed, Jon's quite rude to Spencer and Spencer retorts, but mostly takes it. You should wonder why.

I'm glad Ashley told Spencer too! It's difficult to write around big secrets!

Re: Sorry so long.. llol

[befri44]

That's awesome. =) Especially since they want you to come back for next year and stuff. =)

I agree, they are strange. And I am paying attention, but now I will be more, now that you've said that. And oh goodness.. What secret is there that Jonica thinks gives her the right to treat Spencer in such a way? I've def been wondering why. Now just right it so I KNOW why. ;)

And I'm sure it is. lol But it's mostly out in the open now. Can't wait for your next post darlin! =)

[jessie_10]

Jonica didn't hold back did she? I'm glad Ashley gave it right back to her.

I love the way you right Spencer and Ashley's conversations/banter. It just flows and feels effortless.

Glad you had a great time at camp and I 'can't wait for the next chapter!

[urbankazoos]

Thank you! The banter's where it's at, right?

[nautic187]

I'm glad your time at the camp turned out fun even if it wasn't quite what you expected. At the end of your life you're not going to wish you'd sat around and written more fanfic (even if you're really, really good at it), you'll wish you'd done more stuff like that

[urbankazoos]

You know I can't even begin to reply to all this amazing feedback, right? But I appreciate it more than you know.

Every time you speak well of the dialogue, I want to hug you because IT'S JUST SOOOOOO WHAT MATTERS TO ME. I want to tell a good story and I want to move the plot along in a way that works, but more than anything, I want my dialogue natural and quick and if I've done anything close to that then I'm extremely happy.

[imaferrari]

Ok, first thing, I'd take that damn key from Jonica. Unless she lived there, she had absolutely no reason to walk into that apartment uninvited

[urbankazoos]

You're so insightful that I can't even respond properly without giving something away, so let me just say thanks a lot and hope no one else read this ;)