reasons as to why i should write a book

Aug 19, 2006 01:56

I was at Jason's house earlier today with Beck, Carolyn, and Jeremy. I awoke to Aqua Teen blaring from Jeremy's radio. I'm surprised I finally got to sleep last night. I think for half an hour I heard Carolyn and Jeremy making out. I was hoping and (literally) praying they weren't gonna have sex while I slept on the pull-out-blue bed, with a ( Read more... )

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anonymous August 19 2006, 17:56:49 UTC
It is a good story. It's the longest livejournal entry that I've ever read from start to finish. You did a good job of roping the reader in at the beginning, and didn't overload on the personal commentary in the body (as livejournal people are so apt to do). awkward smiley-face.

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uriskphooka August 19 2006, 19:06:57 UTC
hmm...there's no name under this comment. so, i wonder, who is this? because i like the feed-back.

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barry_the_white August 19 2006, 17:57:08 UTC
Hey, man, it's only been like 150 years. Evolution takes time, dawg. At least you didn't get stuck with joints that make any dance move you attempt look awkward.

You should try to get into Aukema's fiction workshop...

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uriskphooka August 19 2006, 19:07:41 UTC
yeah, i'm thinking about it. the more i do stuff like this the more i feel like i should just go ahead and try my hand at screenwriting.

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