Edge
Here the continuation. Took me long enough *drop*
Yay! I got my old livejournal back^^
It works...It finally works again ToT
WARNINGS: Chapter contains sexual and violent content that may not be suitable for minors~♥
( second chapter here )
Yay! I got my old livejournal back^^
It works...It finally works again ToT
WARNINGS: Chapter contains sexual and violent content that may not be suitable for minors~♥
( second chapter here )
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It's not because he is a 'psycho' (because I like psychos, or some of them... they're interesting XD) it's rather... uh, how should I put this.
*thinks*
Well, first of all it seems to me like he is blaming Usami for making him what he is, it's like he doesn't want to take responsibility for anything and I hate people like that. There might be horrible circumstances in life but it's the choice of the indevidual to decide which path to take, right? >_< So it's like Kiyoshi is making excuses. Aaah, I dunno... Maybe I couldn't see 'inside' of him yet DX
After all, he woke up now, right? Maybe I'll get to understand him now.
(Sorry that I can't explain what I think that well, you see I'm really thinking hard about your characters so that means it's a good story and worth reading ^^)
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No problem with you not liking him. I didn't intend to make him sympathic or somewhat likeable. And you're right. He is blaming Usami for everything because he can't understand his own madness.
I agree with you about this kind of people. But somehow I still like Hanari. He is just simply human. Just extreme. He tries to protect himself by accusing Usami.
I tried to show that in the "monologe" at the end. The instinct-part talking to the naiv-part. Just so you know that he actually is "human" and desperate, observing his own insanity taking over... I'm talking too much...
thanks about the 'good story' óò it means very much to me^^
(And I understand what you try to tell me XD)
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