Edge

[uruchan666]

This is the last chapter. God, this one killed me ;____; took me so long because I didn't want to end it but I wanted it to end nevertheless xDD
Don't cry....wait CRY!!!  ToT Even I cried a little at the end!!!
God I love this story so much.......
So please enjoy!

WARNING! (this time a lil' more than usual...): male x male, sexual content (18+), rape,

Comments

[a_e_r_i_s]

oi! ^o^
hier is mein comment~wolltest ja umbedingt eins. xD (aba auf deutsch, bin zu faul)~hier seid wann isst du kinderaugen? *loooooool*
ok, zu deiner story:
du musst sie echt veröffentlichen, wär sonst ne verschwendung. U___U ich mein, ab un zu is es nich mein fall~du kennst mich ja *rofl* aba ich seh trotzdem das potenzial das dahintersteckt. *intelligent tu* xDDDD
und zu schnulzig find ichs au nich. ^__^ das mit den glühwürmchen is echt toll~
ah ja, einen tag, nachdem du das hier gepostet hast. hatte kiyoharu geburtstag! ^___^ xDDD
~*knuff*~

[uruchan666]

DANKE.... ;___;
ich ess kinderaugen nur wenns sein muss^^
Ja muss gucken, ob ich n verlag find der sowas au drucken würd. ich schätz ma nich unbedingt mein english wird das problem sein, eher der inhalt *drop*
Ich find das mit dem glühwürmchen au hübsch, wusst aba net obs zu schnulzig rüberkommt (war mir au egal muahaha...das musste sein)
OMG er hatte gebbu Q___Q das so niedlich(also das mit einem tag nach meinem posting...net dass er gebbu hat)
Danke für den kommi! jez fühl ich mich net mehr so einsam auf meiner homepage u___u
*chu* *winke*

[lover1492]

ahhhh that was intense. I couldn't help but cry at the end. a lot of impact

[uruchan666]

oh my god you read my story ;___;
I'm so happy somebody read it TT__TT
I hope it was the good sort of crying xDD
As I said....I cried as well u___u
Thank you so much for reading and the comment
*gives cookies*

~♥

[miyu_mon]

Wow.
This might not be the appropriate way of saying it but: This chapter was great! Even my favourite XD
I love the end. It's just that... It was too short. The previous chapters that is XD
I loved the metaphors. The firefly and the light. This really helps to imagine their universe better.
That's why I didn't really like the characters at first. I could not comprehend their thoughts or moves.
A really painful way to reach the reader is to make him 'understand' something insane and at the same time loath it.
I really want to cry now ;__; (My eyes are sore >_<)
You really did a great job on this! Sorry for not reading this before. I was such a fool! XD
There are some other things I noticed but it isn't important. I think I could finally say the right thing (somewhere in this comment XD).
Thank you for writing this.
(And there you said your ideas were dumb. No way! I love your insanity XD But I do not approve of everything 'cuz I'm a nice person.)

[uruchan666]

Sankyuu^^

Yeah I told ya the ending is really short but... if I'd wrote more it would've been boring to be honest. the whole story is really detailed so I guess a quick ending is perfect. It would be meaningless to describe it more than this. (as for I dunno what to write more XDDDDD)

I tried to write something obscure which could be understanded only after reading the whole thing. Therefor the flashbacks XD And as I said, the characters aren't intended to be sympathic. It's more fun writing about persons/charas one oneself doesn't relate to or feel identified to. It's interesting.

Ich hab gesagt das ende is arschig xD

Thanks for reading and liking what I read Q.Q