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A hidden femme's secret - Part One

Oct 01, 2011 01:26

Title: A hidden femme's secret
Subtitle: Reveal
Part: 1/3
Author: Usagi-Atemu-Tom
Verse: TF-Bayverse

Anniversary Challenges: Week four prompts
# A hidden femme's secret (Wild card prompt)
# A dream worth keeping

Rating: PG 17
Genre: romance, dark, angst
Warnings: death (no main character), discussions of rape, abuse, slavery and abortion
Pairings: Jazz/Prowl
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romance, tf-bayverse, drama, prowlxjazz: 11, transformers, angst, multi chapter, rated pg-17, comfort, fanfiction: 2011, death

Comments 7

renegadewriter8 October 1 2011, 00:14:46 UTC

*is too busy running around the house screaming*
CONTINUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUE!!!

usagi_atemu_tom October 1 2011, 00:18:53 UTC

*blink* Wow I am not even finished with posting this at the J/P group and I already get comments? XD Nice. Though right now I am sitting on the final part, writing against time since the contest is about to end soon. I am deadly tired and my poor betareader is suffering because she as to beta everything I send her way right now. *groans* Okay, had enough of a break, need to get back to writing.
Thanks for the comment already. ^^

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usagi_atemu_tom October 2 2011, 20:24:33 UTC

Thank you. ^^

fianna9 October 1 2011, 02:20:06 UTC

I am very interested in this world you have set up. It is dark and unfortunately very realistic. Megatron's abuse by the Fallen parallels what the femmes endured from the Breeders.

usagi_atemu_tom October 2 2011, 20:33:26 UTC

When I considered the wild card prompt, I never expected to come up with something as dark as this and I really was not sure if, with the less time I had, would be able to accomplish it well enough, as such a dark topic like this deserves. However, I decided to give it a try because I also think Jazz has at least gone past the immediate hurt stage. She has, of course not been able to fully overcome what happened, but a lot of time has gone by and there had been a war where she witnessed horrible things as well. Therefore I think I will be able to manage with telling this tale and not allow healing to happen too quickly ( ... )

darkeyes_17 October 1 2011, 07:12:08 UTC

Amazing plot line. I am really enjoying this so far!

usagi_atemu_tom October 2 2011, 20:26:28 UTC

Thank you very much. At first I feared that this all might turn out rather rushed, but in the end I realised I wrote one very long chapter, already longer than I anticipated and the stuff that happenes in part two were supposed to already happen in part one so... even though it felt rushed, it certainly seems not to be. Especially with reactions like yours. ^^
Thanks so much for commenting.