Oct 09, 2020 16:21
HOW'S MY DRIVING?
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For not having English as a first language, you speak it very well, dictionary or not. I guess that's not really about Souji, but still, something I think I need to compliment you on!
Hopefully, once I see more, I'll be able to give you better concrit and tell you what exactly it is that I like, but for now, keep on social linkin'.
also p. sure that leramore person was a bot.
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And haha, it's a weird mix of English being a bit of a first/second language since I've learned it at the same time which is a bad idea for me since I have a sort of language learning disability. Though, I'm really glad to hear that it seems natural. So, thank you on this comment! I really do hope I'll live up to standards! ♥
Also, lmao, I know it's a bot, but I've thought it'll be humorous to keep it around. Just to show how silly those dang bots can be.
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Your activity still leaves a lot to be desired. Sometimes, I get the feeling that you prioritize certain CR over others. You take a lot of hiatuses, and even when you're not on hiatus, you seem to have a tendency to leave people hanging for weeks. It's almost easy to assume that you're dropping threads at times. Both your characters have a fair amount of castmates, and in the case of Souji, where you've had some pretty heavy plots with him that I've seen, but the threads that follow it don't seem to go very far. Of course, there are things that definitely come first, but it also leaves some of your CR, as well as mutual CR in an awkward place when threads are left unresolved for weeks or months. I'm not sure if it's because you're unmotivated, you're in too many threads, or something else. But it's still really troubling to see, not only as someone who enjoys your character, but who enjoys ( ... )
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