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[photodharma]

Comments

[eyelashwish]

The area around the clavicles is a bit distracting from the (amazing) face... it's just too dramatic and it looks clenched and tense. If you toned that down a bit you may find that the composition lead more easily to the face and eyes.

[photodharma]

Yeah, that's definitely one thing this needs.
Thanks for your assistance!