A break in the action...

[uugengiven]

Sometimes I see scenes in my head that just seem real to me. I normally write them down, then just don't post them. Or, write them in my head and store it for later, possibly for use in another story

Comments

[genkobar]

Firstly, wow. You capture a romantic flare very easily. After being tickled by the detailed smile variations, I peaked in a lover's understanding of their moment. Very good stuff - it's mystifying; curiosity drives one forth.

I like it:D