My very first fanfic of Dean/Cas!

Nov 27, 2009 00:44


Title: ‘Til Death Do Us Part

Author: uwalumni2

Rating: R

Pairing: Dean/Castiel

Spoilers: None

Warning: Angst; language; some loving

Summary: “All roads lead to the same destination…” Dean thought he could change that destination shown by Zachariah three years ago. Has Dean been able to or is he heading down that same tragic road? (After watching ( Read more... )

dean/cas, supernatural

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rockstarpeach November 27 2009, 14:49:23 UTC
Oh! So heartbreaking, but... the ending! That is totally what should happen!!

Yeah, your post is kind of wonky looking. LJ can get bitchy sometimes, and no matter what you do, it just won't post anything properly. I find when that happens I have to just delete the post, and start over.

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uwalumni2 November 27 2009, 20:07:29 UTC
Thanks for reading! I banged my head against the desk trying to get this fixed and thought I had...then posted it..well...it looks like crap! Is the entry posting always so slow?! Wow, I could have made a pot of coffee while waiting for it to scroll! :)

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rockstarpeach November 27 2009, 20:23:23 UTC
LJ is usually pretty good about posts. But once in a while there's a hiccup, and no matter what you do, it just comes out screwed, and takes forever.

And wow, now I'm distracted by all the pretty animations in your sidebar.

*drools*

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uwalumni2 November 27 2009, 20:42:38 UTC
**Grins!** I got way carried away with the sidebar animations! I couldn't make up my mind as to which ones to post, so....I put them all up (after my dear friend, Nadine23, showed me how! It probably is too much and I need to clean it up but for now, I will "drool" over Cas and Dean! :) **hugs!**

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jayfray18 November 27 2009, 15:45:54 UTC
That's pretty good for a first fic!

Dean's despair is real, how he regrets the way things are with Castiel leaps out at you.

It could use a beta (I'm the world's worst for not using beta's!) to whittle out the few mis-use of words there are, but other than that, you did good hun!

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uwalumni2 November 27 2009, 20:10:40 UTC
Thank you, sweetie! Yeah, I usually have my husband read all my research papers for work (even through out college, he proof read all my papers!)...I just couldn't ask him with this one..**bats eyelashes with shyness**...I think he would have had a heart attack and I want to keep him around! English is my second language so my grammar isn't great. Sigh...will keep trying! :D

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jayfray18 November 27 2009, 20:22:23 UTC
lol!

I remember the first time my hubby read one of my fics \o/ He looked at me, looked at the screen again, said that's Gibbs and DiNozzo (from NCIS), doing things.......rude things..... to each other, you, they, that's. And then he walked out *sniggers* he's never read over my shoulder again lol!

If you ever want me to read over anything first, you're more than welcome to send it over. I'm not perfect by any stretch of the imagination, but another set of eyes always sees things differently, and picks up on the things you as the writer think you've written as opposed to what you have written!

English is my second language so my grammar isn't great English is my only language and mine isn't great either =D

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uwalumni2 November 27 2009, 20:47:55 UTC
OH!!!!! I love NCIS! I had a job offer with them but I wouldn't have been able to stay in WA state and I couldn't leave my parents (as I was taking care of my father). It would have been an awesome job and they wanted me because of my language. I will just love it from the show! Hahaha! I can just see your husband being stumped! I am sure my hubby would have fainted at what I wrote and love to read! Slasher the better! I may pick up on your offer on your eyes for proof reading! **Hugs you tight!** I think I am gun shy right now with posting an entry...whimper...I just tried it again and put lots of spaces in between and sent it over to deancastiel community. Don't know if it will be accepted or not. At least it looks nice and easier to read! Lessons learned! **hugs you tight again!** :D

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uwalumni2 December 9 2009, 03:12:42 UTC
Thank you, sweetie! I am anxious about next years episode that says "back to the future", I believe. I wonder if we will see future!Dean and future!Cas?! Thank you for reading this! **Hugs you tight!** :D

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