Bones Redux - Chapter 3

[va32h]

I am putting these two episodes together because there really isn't much about them that needs to be altered for a "B&B are together premise."  In fact, there's nothing about them that needs to be changed to support that premise. (Which is why I think they could have been put together much soon, but I digress...)

Other things I noticed on my rewatch

Comments

[dorisbay]

Loved the last sentence.
One thing that I noticed is that every situation goes much faster than the other million you wrote in the past.
I don't know if it's just my impression!, but it seems to me that there is a constant change of scene, and sometime I have to try to slow myself in the reading, because I feel just like the written words tried to make me go faster, vortically taking me into the scene, so rapidly that when the chapters end It appeared like it was just a blink.
Does that make sense?
btw, considering your timeline updates, and the fact that you said you would have updated until the last week before the premiere.. am I free to hope in a lot more chapters than I thought?? :-)
thanks for the chapter

[va32h]

I know these are short and fast moving vignettes, Sonia, I'm sorry. I have said pretty much everything I have ever wanted to say about BB at this point and I would rather save new plot ideas for my original fiction. My heart isn't in tic anymore and I suspect it shows. But I did promise a hiatus tic to the people who donated and I feel obligated to do it. Although if I do it badly I suppose it is better to leave it be.

[dorisbay]

But it was absolutly not a criticism!Please don't take it as that,you know how much I love the way you write and I would be very sorry if you thought I'm not enjoing this fic!so please, don't apologize, instead I do! I've never read anything less than delicious from you. And this time is not an exception

[makd]

very, very nice.

Especially love the last sentence.

[officelove_10]

Loved the ending there!

[fourth_rose]

Being wanted - that was even better than being needed.

Aw. That line gave me the happy fuzzies, because it's something I really wish Booth would realize at some point - not in the "it's a lesson he needs to learn" sense, but in the "he'd be so much happier if he realized it" way (if that makes sense).

I'm sorry it took me so long to catch up with this fic - work went nuts on me again, but I'm really excited that you keep continuing this story, and I'm eagerly looking forward to more! :))

[muzakys]

The best part of your writing is how well you know these characters. They are always going to simultaneously misunderstand and understand each other better than anyone. I wish we in Brennan's head a little more though! Thanks for posting.