each night has had new direction

Aug 22, 2005 21:13

it's that pause in your thought that's resulting from the notion you'd only be able to say "i love you" one last time that sparks a threatening movement-- what if you only had one chance to say goodbye to one person? i've been taken for granted and lost track of some of my most valuable ties that bonded me to my most valuable possessions. you've ( Read more... )

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jank was_up_playas August 22 2005, 18:36:28 UTC
i dont feel like readin into this.. so im just gonna ask u wat it means, since im talking to u on aim. i do love u tho.

LOTS.

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Re: jank va_patt3rson August 22 2005, 18:39:18 UTC
love you too, matty!!!

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anonymous August 22 2005, 18:42:07 UTC
hmm...interesting opening. poetry in prose, a good twist. and maybe matt has a point, this seems to go just slightly deeper than the earlier works. is there something youre not being entirely honest about?
Jason

ps good luck at tennis and dance

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va_patt3rson August 22 2005, 18:44:29 UTC
haha... you two pick up on feelings really well. true fans. =P. but i mean... nothing too serious-- it's like every thought that was in my head at the time combined is this piece of writing. and i'm being completely honest, but not completely open.

ps and thanks. <33.

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anonymous August 22 2005, 19:02:12 UTC
ha ha. i like your sense of irony. you "every thought that was in my head at the time combined is this piece of writing" then say that your not being completely open. i wonder if anyone else caught this? well anyway i guess you have your reasons for not being open. im certainly not the person you would admit the reason to, so i wont bother myself with it. you can tell the rest if or when youre ready.
Jason

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va_patt3rson August 23 2005, 07:03:39 UTC
it was everything... just vague... i can mention everything but still not really say anything at all.

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atwistedshell August 22 2005, 19:26:13 UTC
You're not telling anyone, but I'm asking anyway -- who is this about?

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va_patt3rson August 23 2005, 07:05:12 UTC
YO MOMMA. haha. just kidding... really no one in particular.

on a lighter note-- i miss you and we need to hang out, even though i doubt it will be before the end of summer. =p.

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atwistedshell August 23 2005, 14:47:33 UTC
agreed.

We should get on that.

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haha was_up_playas August 25 2005, 18:07:09 UTC
i dont get why u have to be so mysterious all the time? are you hiding something? or is mystery whats in now a days... maybe im just behind the times... haha o ya i need to talk to u about something... ive got a lot on my mind and i really need to talk to someone about it with... and basically ur the person i wanna talk about it with... haha we better see each other again b4 school...
love ya

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Re: haha va_patt3rson August 26 2005, 06:01:42 UTC
give me a call then.... <3333.

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Re: haha was_up_playas August 26 2005, 07:16:04 UTC
i will do that... as soon as i get the chance lol

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