Convincing

Sep 13, 2010 00:14


Title: Convincing
Pairing: Spain/Romano
Rating: No idea
Summary: It's not like he can't accept that he's in love with the bastard, it's just that he has himself convinced that Antonio doesn't love him back.
Notes: Please excuse me the Twilight spoof. xD I think it was that alone that breeded this odd fic in the first place... >_> And I've never even ( Read more... )

hetalia, spain, romano, fanfic

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verito_s September 12 2010, 22:32:47 UTC
8D I liked it! It's a nice change, not denial!romano, just usual unsecured!romano

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vadriplz September 13 2010, 18:43:26 UTC
Glad you liked it~! <3

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joudan_janai September 13 2010, 04:04:54 UTC
Oh god, THIS!
I LOVE IT ;3;! The way you characterised them it's different from many fics in a way I can't explain because my english sucks xD BUT I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT 8DDDD great job /o/

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vadriplz September 13 2010, 18:49:14 UTC
Thank you so much!
I just hope that 'different' doesn't mean too OOC, though. xD; Uh, I just love to write Antonio a bit crooked is all...

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joudan_janai September 16 2010, 03:21:33 UTC
oh, not OOC at all 8D It's just that it's a side of Spain that I don't see so much so it was really interesting 8D I like it =3= Spain is such a moron x3 but he has his dark side (?) xD

... I really hope I made some sense xD damn my english orz xD

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nanonaneko September 13 2010, 16:58:55 UTC
Oh god, Antonio was so scary. The sing-songing was just...shudder-worthy. And not exactly in the usual good way. XD He's also a little bit rougher with Lovino here than usually depicted too, what with the hair-yanking, leg-lifting and nail-digging. I was half expecting Lovino to kick his face in and run screaming from the house. But it worked out alright in the end, which is all sorts of yay. An awkward phrase here and there, but a really great read! I seldom get to see Spain so...well. Scary XD

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vadriplz September 13 2010, 18:56:55 UTC
I have to confess that I love scary/rough Spain. 8D~ he's dense and nice but he wants what he wants so it can't be helped... or that's how he presents himself in my head, anyway. xD
Sorry about the grammar and thank you for the review~!

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pandawolf September 14 2010, 04:04:07 UTC
Darn! the world needs moar batshit insane Spain XD
Thank you so much for sharing!

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vadriplz October 27 2010, 05:36:20 UTC
I agree, the world doesn't provide enough insane!Spain for us! ;u;
Thank you so much for the comment!

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loukhos October 26 2010, 23:00:42 UTC
You really make me want to get back into Hetalia, writing things like that.

Why aren't you a poet, again? :o

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vadriplz October 27 2010, 05:35:10 UTC
Don't be swayed by my writings, Khossy-poo, it ain't good for ye.

And I'm not a poet because you're more poety than me and we can't both be poets because that'd just be wrong. In some strange poety incesty way...

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