Title: Through the Ashes (4/?)
Author:
vail_kagamiBeta:
nightrider101Rating: PG
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Summary: It's been fortold that Arthur will return at a time when he is needed most. What Merlin needs most, right now, is for Arthur to remember who he is, and not to kill Merlin when he does.
Word count: 5562
Note: So sorry for the long delay. Real life ate me for a
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I'll try to update a little sooner next time.
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And it's all woven in so wonderfully with the humor - I died laughing during the entire 'Merlin bought the internet' scene! XD
I can't wait to read more!
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Thanks for the comment!
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I kind of want to think Sasher is the dragon and he goes by Sasher because it kind of sounds like Slasher and after all he is the Slash Dragon. Anyway, I really enjoyed it, and even though this is my first time reading it, I'm glad you continued.
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Merlin and the internet fail was a spontanous scene not originally planned - but it works so well! I like it myself, which is rare.
Their banter is just fun to write!
Thanks for reading!
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I don't think Arthur and Merlin banter is never not fun to write or read or watch. I'm trying to think of a circumstance where that would be the case and it isn't coming.
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I know how much you struggled getting back with this story, but it doesn't show. At all. Now that's impressive!
The banter was spot on, and the humor was there and very realistic. Yet there is something else, a deeper story, something darker, lurking just out of reach. I love that! I have some theories, but right now, I just want to savor this chapter and not over think anything. I also lack the brain power to over think much at the moment. ;)
I loved Merlin buying the internet and his spontaneous trip to Florida!
This chapter left me wanting more and soon. Until then, I'll have to be patient...and harass you because that's the kind of friend I am. ;)
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I think I can continue this rather soon. I'd forgotten how much fun it was.
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