Ghosts in Attics III, Chapter 7

Apr 30, 2010 22:05

TITLE: Ghosts in Attics III, Chapter 7
FANDOM: Star Trek TOS
CHARACTERS/PAIRING: Spock/McCoy, Kirk, M'Benga
TABLE: # 8 - Miscellaneous B
PROMPT: 03. Answers
RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: 6335
WARNINGS:  Mentions of mind control and self-harm.
SUMMARY: Taking McCoy back from the mirror universe was the first step. Kirk, Spock and the others ( Read more... )

fandom: star trek, * story: ghosts in attics, medium: story, table: misc b

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lilbatfacedgirl April 30 2010, 22:18:05 UTC
Okay, okay, okay...right now I'm just flailing and doing a happy dance!!!!! Now I'm going to go read this and then I'll actually write an actual comment.

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lilbatfacedgirl April 30 2010, 23:01:54 UTC
Wow! I have to say, this is the first time I've really started to like Burke. She's right, though. She's objective and they aren't. And poor Bones just can't get a break. GaH! This story is breaking my heart!

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vail_kagami May 1 2010, 03:35:58 UTC
I'm glad you're getting used to Burke. She's not meant to be a likeable character, just a necessary one, but if she came across as a total bitch I would have failed as a writer.

One more chapter, I think, then this installment of the story is over. I hope the wait won't be quite as long this time.

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zerrah May 1 2010, 01:28:58 UTC
Ah, every time I read another part to this series I want more! I like how Spock is conflicted about his feelings and almost seems scared of them, even if he won't acknowledge it even to himself.

Now the protectiveness, the need to shield Leonard from everyone else was still there, but it had lessened in the minutes he spend sitting beside the human in the dark, listening to the faint echo of the other’s disturbed mind.

T.T This was so sweet. I <3 a protective Spock.

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vail_kagami May 1 2010, 03:38:07 UTC
I <3 a protective Spock.

Me too!

Spock doesn't have much more time to figure out his feelings - this part of the story is almost over.

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vail_kagami May 1 2010, 16:05:46 UTC
Thanks for the comment!

What book are you reading?

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vail_kagami May 1 2010, 19:29:17 UTC
Sounds good. I won't be able to read any Star trek novels for a year, but I'll remember this for when I come back.

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eerya May 1 2010, 21:12:47 UTC
!!!! I was waiting for this new chapter from a long time!!! Thanks thanks thanks thanks!!!
I cry when Spock spoke with Kirk, for the history of the fingers of McCoy. Terrible.
I love Kirk, he loves so much his friends.
I understand Spock very well, I am badly for he, He doesn't think that the situation will be so hard!
Stupid M'Benga, he mustn't do it!
McCoy, Spock will not abandon to you! He can't.
I love you *.* I'm waiting next chapter... thanks!!!

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vail_kagami May 1 2010, 21:22:44 UTC
I'm glad you like it! Sorry for the long wait.
I hope I can post the next part a little sooner, but I can't make promises.
This part of the story is almost over, so Spock doesn't have much more time to make up his mind about what to do.

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