New White Collar Fic: Try to be True (Gen, PG-13)

Dec 15, 2011 12:29

Three pops and Peter Burke went down. A red puddle immediately formed beneath him, dark and spreading quickly.

“Go!” Peter yelled, from the ground. Diana grabbed Caffrey by the arm and shoved, finding shelter behind the concrete construction barriers.

“Peter,” Neal whispered, shoulders jerking as if to go towards him.

“Caffrey,” Diana said. “ ( Read more... )

peter, white collar, neal, diana

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schneefink December 15 2011, 17:55:42 UTC
I like this! Interesting idea. Diana is awesome.

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vain_glorious December 16 2011, 04:09:10 UTC
She is awesome. Thanks! :)

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bbuttercup December 15 2011, 18:22:20 UTC
Wonderful. I love the banter between Diana and Neal; it feels very true to the show :o)

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vain_glorious December 16 2011, 04:09:24 UTC
Thanks for the feedback! :)

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ext_186374 December 15 2011, 19:16:41 UTC
I love, love, LOVE it.

Honestly, I'd watch a season of this. Not that I don't love Peter, but the change in dynamic is so yummy.

I think we should all write a virtual season where Diana has Neal's leash. ::sighs wistfully::

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ext_186374 December 15 2011, 23:16:38 UTC
Why yes, it does. *g*

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vain_glorious December 16 2011, 04:09:39 UTC
Thanks for the comment! :)

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love_82 December 15 2011, 19:24:49 UTC
This is cute. I could Diana reacting this way if this happened on the show.

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vain_glorious December 16 2011, 04:09:54 UTC
Thanks for the feedback! :)

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frith_in_thorns December 15 2011, 19:46:19 UTC
This is lovely! I really like Diana here :D

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vain_glorious December 16 2011, 04:10:44 UTC
Thanks for the comment! :)

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