Jeez! I didn't see that coming! I like tha way you describe Em's thoughts, I really do. I wonder what's going to happen between her and Jaime. wow, that's gonna be interesting.. I'm excited to know what's next, please, update soon!
Well i'll look forward to hearing your comments... after i've had some sleep (by my calculation i've written almost 4000 words today plus watching a few lectures from uni and starting to analyse my film for my essay)
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You'll just have to wait and see ;)
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I like tha way you describe Em's thoughts, I really do. I wonder what's going to happen between her and Jaime. wow, that's gonna be interesting..
I'm excited to know what's next, please, update soon!
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Damn there's just too many different things that could happen next... which to choose.
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Definitely Ewwww factor on hearing the married couple have sex (poor Em) but you redeemed yourself with the twist. HA! I laughed out loud.
Quite an angsty chapter. Glad Emily has Zooey. She was cracking me up with her dialogue. You did a great job with the phone call.
Pretty sure Jaime won't be too happy to find them both in the living room in the morning. And poor James, he's an innocent bystander, isn't he? LOL
Okay...on to chapter 7.
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I know... i'm so in love with Zooey (in case you couldn't guess).
Haha, we'll see about James soon enough.
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Btw I'm still processing chapter 7 - so comments on that a little later. ;)
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Well i'll look forward to hearing your comments... after i've had some sleep (by my calculation i've written almost 4000 words today plus watching a few lectures from uni and starting to analyse my film for my essay)
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Wow I love the way you think... will be good to read what the aftermath of David's slip-up is.
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Thankyou :)
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