Nine Gates of Hell (17/?)

[valamagic]

Title: Nine Gates of Hell
Fandom: RPF
Pairing: Emily Deschanel/David Boreanaz
Rating: NC-17
Summary: David asks Emily to spend the week with him at the beach, but they have company in the form of his wife, son and her boyfriend. Things do not go as planned.
Disclaimer: Emily and David aren't mine... nor is Zooey... or anyone else mentioned in this

Comments

[thetruthbetween]

... Can has more plz?

Seriously, I discovered this story the night before last, and I'm so addicted it's ridic LOL So much with the love

[valamagic]

Aaw, thanks. I'm actually writing the next part now so hopefully i won't be leaving it so long this time. Of course i really should be writing my essay right now....

[thetruthbetween]

Psh, essays are overrated LOL Says the woman who's no longer in school LOL But yay for faster updating! *bouncesquee*

[valamagic]

Haha, you're lucky. It's supposed to be in at 4pm (it's 2:45 now) but the system at the uni is a bit screwed so i just have to get it in before 9am... which would be great if i had started.

I love this

[nyre1]

I hope when push comes to shove he can leave and do it as well as you had him act here. If he does Jaden will be fine.
Nyre

PS I am not a Jamie liker, let alone lover, but I still have the feeling Jamie has used those kids at every turn to get him and to try and keep him.

Re: I love this

[valamagic]

I don't know, it does seem pretty hopeful as far as him leaving well goes. but who knows.

[valamagic]

The next one is actually pretty much done!

[bonesncis12]

Yay!! lol I absolutely LOVE this story!! Definitely one of favorites!

And I agree about the whole Jamie using the kids to get to him sort of thing..

Things aren't looking very good for the "happy couple". Seriously..fake smiles..wedding ring all of a sudden..public appearences that were never made before..it's all a show.

And I for one am loving the Demily pics with the hand holding..WHOA!! lol

Great chapter and can't wait for the next one..please update soon! :D

[valamagic]

Aaw, thanks.

Nope, definitely not looking good. And the other pics were so cute, but i can't help but think he's digging himself a bigger hole and dragging Emily into it by holding hands with her and not his wife.

[tinkrella25]

This was the very first demily fic i ever read. I didn't even know what demily was until I read this. I love it. I'm SO SO SO glad you updated. I want to go back and re-read now! It's been so long. I can't wait for more. I do hope he really does stay with emily and not jaime although....if jaime being pregnant wasn't reason enough for him to stay than i can't think of what else would be. I love how you wrote it being sad for him. There is no way you can end a marriage and leave the house your kids live in and not be sad. I really hope things with jaden stay okay and I hope jaime doesn't cause too much trouble with custody. In real life....I get the feeling she would use them to keep him around. just a hunch.

[valamagic]

Wow, first ever. Yeah, i know it's taken a long time!