Crawling Back to You.

[valeriansunrise]

DISCLAIMER: I do not own Tsubasa: RESERVoir CHRoNiCLE, it only belongs to CLAMP. I also do not own 'Crawling Back to You' which belongs to the band Daughtry.
AUTHOR'S NOTE: So, this is the first fanfic I have written in over a year and for the most part, I think I'm happy with the result. I apologize if there are grammatical, spelling or any kinds

Comments

[hanabluebird]

Baka~ That is the greatest, most wonderful thing I've ever read. ITS WIN, LOVE!

I didn't notice spelling mistakes, I didn't notice ANYTHING other then how amazing it was<3

Infinity was full of angst and depression and you show it well~ I'm kidnapping this and never sharing it because then others would be around you and I don't wanna share. xP ;;kisses forehead;

I love your writing, I love your story, I love the details and how you played Kuro in this<3 I shall be waiting for more~ x3

[valeriansunrise]

It is NOT great, wonderful or anything T//T
-whines- it has SO mayn mistakes.

Hai, Infinity was... >///< mew... stop making me all shy and and and and annnnddddd.

>///< Kuro has ONE or like TWO lines... how can you like it? D;

... I'll work on more tomorrow after work if I'm not forced into homework.

[hanabluebird]

Fine . . It's beautiful, it's inspiring, it's wonderMOUS!
;;smiles; I don't see any mistakes<3

Inifnity is amazing x3 And how am I making you shy, love~?

And that's how it SHOULD be. Kuro isn't a big talker~ And you got his actions and observations perfect. :3

Don't push yourself~ School before puppy xP

[valeriansunrise]

It is notttt ; w ;
-flushes and flails-

it is amazing >< and it just issss! Okieee?

I suppose that's true . . . but still T ^ T I feel I have it messed up, or maybe I'm biased as you roleplay the perfect Kuro-pii already.

>< hai;; -mew-;;

[zelinxia]

Aww, this was lovely. I adore fics where they, especially Fai, comes to term of what will happen from there on out post Celes. Your characterization of Fai in Infinity was spot on (and that world is tricky for me to understand what he's thinking and going through).

One thing though: "His heart began to feel heavy and ache and hexould feel tears trying to form in the corners of his eyes." (It's after the lyrics "Holding by a thread, when everything said/I regret it"). It should be a singular "eye", I believe. :)

And another one last thing. I already gushed about it to hanabluebird, but I LOVE your journal layout picture. So much. It's gorgeous and they look so precious. <3

[valeriansunrise]

Aww! Thank you~ :) I like those too, then again I'm mostly addicted to anything related from Post Tokyo to Post Series, as well as Yama, Outo and such :D Character developing worlds = yay!

Thank you! :3 I always ... vaguely wonder if I over do it xD but hearing that is quite nice too.

True! I shall go fix that now~ :3 thank you.

AWW! Why thank you c':
I can give you a link to the original if you'd like? :D

[zelinxia]

Those are pretty much my favorite arcs too as well. I'm really getting into Yama lately - so many possibilities can happen in those six months!

I would love a link to the original image. <3<3<3

[valeriansunrise]

I know! I thought the world was nice at first, but now . . . its like: oh my~! It started with this fanfiction where Kurogane was trying to get Fai to use a sword and bam! I fell in love with it, there are dozens of options to chose from :D

aha! alright then! here we go~:

http://www.zerochan.net/734739