Ficlet: I Love You More

[valeriehall343]

Title: I Love You More
Pairing: Affair HHR
Rating: PG13

Comments

[marenkp]

This one was a more bittersweet than the other, but I still enjoyed it. Great job.

[valeriehall343]

Yeah, I don't know why this idea popped into my head. But I liked the idea of Harry mostly convincing himself it was the lure of the forbidden, but deep down knowing that its just that they really are perfect for each other.

[aimakichan]

Love.

[valeriehall343]

Thanks!

[madderbrad]

I was a bit miffed with Harry over the first half, my ire at his laziness growing, angry that he was happy to have whatever he has (!?) with Hermione without putting effort into everything else that comes along with a real partnership.

But the last sentence made up for it - he understands that he wants the whole box and dice - bills and dishes and kids and owls and children too - with her after all. That things won't be 'perfect' without going all the way. Go for it/her, Harry. She'll be worth all the fuss/trouble!

[valeriehall343]

Yeah, I was trying to evoke the feeling that Harry was burying this feeling because it's the only way he can deal. He can't go for it (really) because Hermione is married to Ron :(

Thanks for reading!

[miconic]

Lovely, in all kinds of wrongs and rights as they should be. Thanks for sharing the fic. It's succinct yet gets the story across.

[valeriehall343]

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you like it :)