After And On - Lost: Charlotte/Daniel/Juliet/Sawyer - Adrenaline + Crises - PG-13hitlikehammersJanuary 11 2011, 01:01:20 UTC
They wake up in the warmest sun, the coolest shade; their eyes open to brightness and dark. Their skin is clothed, bare; the scratch of sand and the gentle brush of grass and breeze, the soft touch of flesh, roughened -- smooth; the air is sweet, short, sucked heavy through pursed lips: oppressive -- and their chests heave as they stare up at nothing, as their arms stretch and their muscles ache and their hands grasp, grope for purchase, for the touch of one another, side to side to side and onward, upward: forever
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Re: After And On - Lost: Charlotte/Daniel/Juliet/Sawyer - Adrenaline + Crises - PG-13valhalla37January 12 2011, 04:16:17 UTC
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
This is like, pure poetry! Oh my god, I love it -- it's so gorgeous and ethereal that I've read it again and again and gotten something even more beautiful every time. And Charlotte/Daniel/Juliet/Sawyer! Pretty much my favourite OT4, and one that I don't think I've really seen much fic about, which is a shame because it's so awesome, as you've clearly proven here. ;P
God, I don't even know what to say this is so incredible. I think in all of it, if I can even isolate one part as being a favourite, this line just grabbed me: It’s smoke and reflections on the ocean and the sky: burns and tears and loss, and Juliet remembers blood in her mouth, and Dan’s fingertips press like brands against the underside of her wrist; and Charlotte’s hand is splayed on Dan’s chest, searching for a gap, a hole, and Jim’s thumb brushes carefully above her upper lip -- pulls away clean.It just connects them all so wonderfully, and has so much tragedy packed into such a beautiful line
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Re: After And On - Lost: Charlotte/Daniel/Juliet/Sawyer - Adrenaline + Crises - PG-13hitlikehammersJanuary 18 2011, 13:23:59 UTC
I cannot tell you how happy I am that you enjoyed this -- I was a little afraid that the... "poetic" slant of it didn't work at all, so the fact that you liked it is relieving :) Thank you!
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This is like, pure poetry! Oh my god, I love it -- it's so gorgeous and ethereal that I've read it again and again and gotten something even more beautiful every time. And Charlotte/Daniel/Juliet/Sawyer! Pretty much my favourite OT4, and one that I don't think I've really seen much fic about, which is a shame because it's so awesome, as you've clearly proven here. ;P
God, I don't even know what to say this is so incredible. I think in all of it, if I can even isolate one part as being a favourite, this line just grabbed me: It’s smoke and reflections on the ocean and the sky: burns and tears and loss, and Juliet remembers blood in her mouth, and Dan’s fingertips press like brands against the underside of her wrist; and Charlotte’s hand is splayed on Dan’s chest, searching for a gap, a hole, and Jim’s thumb brushes carefully above her upper lip -- pulls away clean.It just connects them all so wonderfully, and has so much tragedy packed into such a beautiful line ( ... )
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