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nebakanezer January 28 2010, 06:55:56 UTC
Offering each other as much as they could, yet holding so much back. *sigh* So very sad and that last line just rips at my heart. Nicely done.

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valhallalilly January 28 2010, 20:29:40 UTC
*hugs* thank you!! :) sorry about the heart ripping ;)

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tigerlily0 January 31 2010, 04:02:08 UTC
Nice. I think you've captured their feelings well.

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valhallalilly January 31 2010, 04:45:00 UTC
aww thank you!

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:-) elke_tanzer February 21 2010, 23:04:42 UTC
This is lovely.

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Re: :-) valhallalilly February 22 2010, 03:24:42 UTC
Yay! "lovely" is very good! Thank you :)

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morgenwrites June 23 2010, 00:54:11 UTC
OMG ANGSTYTIEMS. POSSIBLY YOU HAS HEARD THAT I LOVE THEM, YES?

Sometimes if she felt brave enough she would let Richard pull her naked form to his chest, letting him feel her against him.

I LOVE that. With all of K's fears about her powers, that really is such a brave thing for her to do. ALSO A VERY SEXAY ONE.

One moment he would be at her side, and the next he would be gone, slipping away, trying to gain his composure somewhere alone among the trees.

HEE. IT IS TOO MUCH FOR ORSK TO HANDLE. :D

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valhallalilly June 23 2010, 01:35:57 UTC
UMM YES I MAYBE HAVE HEARD THAT IDK REALLY THOUGH.

BUT OHHH I"M THRILLED THAT YOU LIKE MY ANGSTY TIEMS :DD

Yes it is very brave of her. He just wants to hold her and she just wants to let him.
AND Everything is almost too much for orsk maybe lol I didn't even really think of that OH MY Hahahha idkw since I wrote it...
HEEE I LOVE THIS COMMENT!! TYTY

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