Title: Uhhh...idk?
Pairing: John/Aeryn
Rating: PG
Summary: Short fic on Aeryn's thoughts after the kiss in LATP: P3
A/N: I asked for fic ideas when I was bored at work.
virkatjol suggested the time frame. Thanks to
roxybisquaint for the thorough beta!
They were compatible. That much she knew.
Whatever rules there were in the universe obviously hadn't been raised with
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And the release of fluid levels to the max with him. WE KNOW THAT JOHN MAKES HER COME HARD... hehehe
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I liked your discussion of "fit". It's something a lot of folks don't seem to understand or acknowledge.
The phrase "released her fluid levels more than any other partners" doesn't feel like a female sentiment, even for a PK. Perhaps you can find something less (clinical? male sounding?) to take its place.
I've been working in the hot sun most of the day, so my creativity is absent, but if something brilliant occurs, I'll pass it along.
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