After the storm - part three

[vallie82]

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[tldreamer]

Wow, too bad about Joanne, but now our boys are even closer. I loved the gun shooting instruction...I'm sure Reid was enjoying it too! (btw, I love your little jokey comments that are dropped in occasionally like: As the days go by, Luke learns a lot about Reid. Like the fact that he doesn´t need much sleep and seems to be just fine with getting only four or five hours every night, while Luke needs at least seven so he doesn’t feel like a zombie for the rest of the day. Okay, bad comparison.

[smoothlikebutta]

Oh no! I am not surprised by Luke wanting to save the child, but it's sad that his impulsiveness led to Joanne's death.

I am glad Luke and Reid are growing closer.

[sleeper6]

Joanne! No! That's what I hate about zombie stories, fics, and shows--good people always die. :(

Still, you created good drama and tension and suspense.

Uh oh, now it's just Luke and Reid. The gun-training session was wonderfully written!