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Stranger in the Passenger Seat (For Bluespire)

Jan 14, 2011 17:59

Stranger in the Passenger Seat
a story in three parts.
Author: riastarstruck
Rating: R
Summary: This is the tale of how they met, fell in love and got their lives back to where they were meant to be on a road trip to LA
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the order of words
Warning: a bit angsty at times…. Shut up, I know, I’m terrible. Oh yeah, and its unbeta’d
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Comments 11

bluespire January 14 2011, 07:03:44 UTC

Effing C on my prezzie fic. Yippee!

riastarstruck January 14 2011, 08:08:12 UTC

i didn't understand a word of that..

bluespire January 14 2011, 08:53:21 UTC

Lol, I'll translate. That was me being a spaz whilst claiming FC. I was just too excited to claim "F" C, I had to claim Effing C. And "prezzie" is the weird word for "present" that I picked up from MJ. :) But you get the "Yippee" part right? :P (See icon above for confusion.)

OMG girl, I sooooo loved my present. So much. I'm the luckiest vammer on the planet. Thank you.

A marker placed in the sand, a few days that change everything so that nothing feels the same afterward. They fell in love. So beautiful.

This final installment was perfect. Nothing epic, just slow and steady as it unfolds for us. What a sweet little story. Happens everyday but to our boys, the earth moved and they were not the same when the shaking stopped.

The tension buliding as they approached LA was good. Bam's nervousness had me nervous for him. I was all, "Dude, you are gonna need to relax or you're gonna fuck it up!" Good work, that!

I absolutely LOVED the scene on the bed before the competition:
Ville straightened up, looking down at the man below ( ... )

riastarstruck January 14 2011, 09:57:59 UTC

i'm beyond ecstatic that your happy with your present! i slaved away at it but it was all worth it to hear you loved it ( ... )

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shamone666 January 14 2011, 08:48:49 UTC

I really loved this story :) And your writing is simply amazing!
Its beautiful the way the boys found themselves in each other.
Thankyou :)

riastarstruck January 14 2011, 09:47:57 UTC

"The boys found themselves in each other"
thank you darling, you just summed up the story in one sentence!
i'm glad you like it, theres nothing nicer in the world to hear

alicez17 January 15 2011, 20:13:16 UTC

What an absolutely beautiful tale, about losing and finding each other.

I wish I could express in words how much I love this, but I don't think I can. The entire story is worth quoting, but I will settle for one of my favourite lines;

A hundred stories which come off like branches stripped bare by winter, exposed to the elements and twisting up with tangled bark towards every direction but still just a part of the overall story.

I think the introductions of 'Beginning - Middle - Ending' worked so well. The entire story was haunting; twisting and turning in a dark, deep, but also lovely way.

Really, really, really well done!

riastarstruck January 18 2011, 03:16:16 UTC

thank you so much!!
i'm so glad you liked this, it was hard to write but i think it was worth it

anonymous January 17 2011, 20:28:54 UTC

finally read the whole story and i've to admit: i pretty fuckin much like it.
the plot as it is, is great but does not include too much.
What i like here, is your writing style! You describe unimportant things so exact and visual... i stood beside the characters during the whole story.

REALLY GREAT WORK!!!!

hope to read more from you some day...