well...i'm too excited about Hyde n' Gackt being in the next chapter and there'll be a little more KxA scene...since Aiji'd grown a bit older already...errrrrrrrr...i'm evil...XDDD
uhh.... the only thing I'm going to say about this part.... confusing....... XP not your English or anything but the things Shinya is saying. I think it's better if you write down what Shinya say to Aiji about the rules and the residents. Or you will add them into the story later?? XD
Sorry if what I have typed down is confusing.... (I have a seriously lacking in English vocabulary XD)
well...sorry about this chapter being confusing...i'll clear things up later on...X_X (i wonder is that my fic being confusing is the reason why ppl stop reading them.+_+)
maybe it's confusing becoz i'm still yet to go into detail what's going on within Night City, man i'm not so sure about it myself.+++++++++
Wow, Mizuki I took a really long time in finishing this. The description of Night City is intriguing. I'm vaguely reminded of the anime, Get Backers. There's a place there called the Infinite Fortress (which isn't a fortress at all, it's a city) Although day and night are perfectly normal parts of Infinite Fortress many other things aren't. The place itself mutates the human dwellers, and then there are "creatures" which aren't really human, but they can't leave Infinite Fortress. Night City reminds me a lot of that, except I'm thinking a bit more of underground cities that totally don't see daylight, and the residents are probably night creatures (vampires, lycanthropes, changelings, minor demons like incubii, etc.) That's essentially what I loved best about this chapter, because the whole description of the place is very intriguing and Aiji is sure to meet a lot of colorful characters here
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man, the Infinite Fortress in Get Backer is based on late Kwoloon Walled City too, the manga-ka had already admited it...XDDD and so did the scene in Ghost in Shell...
vampires, lycanthropes, changelings, minor demons like incubii OMFG...this idea sounds good to me, i still haven't figured out what kind of residents should the Night City has...thax for ur idea!!!*hugs* though the region where Shinya's residing is a "safer" area within Night City...which mean the demons who live there are far much tamed than those wild things....and those really violenct demons won't show up all the time.^^
mummmm...maybe i should get my YM back in order to chat to u...XDDD
Wow really! That's cool! ^^ Anyway, that's the type of image the description evokes. In any case, I'm also very curious about the types of creatures in the city. Maybe they can be like the ones in Get Backers? The lower levels are the lesser demons, eg. undead creatures like vampires, and such. As you go higher, the residents become more powerful and more evil/chaotic. At the highest level should be something of a god that's almost difficult to challenge (think like Akasha in Queen of the Damned, or something. ^^;) And then they can have servant creatures like imps or such...
well i like your idea about the residents within Night City a lot...but i think i'll try something like what William Gibson has described in his novel Virtual Light about the Bridge...(*sighs* one more novel to re-read, oh god...)
*late ;~;* Your description is wonderful. >: I'm really intrigued by the whole night city scenery and seeing the different relationships between characters. ..And more of vampire Kirito sounds fun 8D
thank for reading...i'm working my fingers into bones to continue it, yeah Night City is a hell lot of fun, but i'm wondering how could u tell from daytime to nighttime if it's always dark.XDDD *sweatdrops*i'm serious though.XD
Hey. I'm Suku, and I saw that you joined the NC-17 community, I was wondering if you could put a link in your LJ? There are some banners on the info page, ofcourse if you don't like them you could make your own and just put NC-17 on it. But there should be more to choose from in the next few days.
Lol. I saw you put it up, but that's not one of the banners. x_x The four smaller ones above it are the banners to use, the one you have posted is the marker for Member of the month. XD so hopefully there where be more to choose from later but for now we only have those four. And please upload to your pwn Photobucket or Imageshack.
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Vampite Kiri is an insane amount of love. ♥hearts;♥♥♥♥
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will try to continue!^^
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You'd better! I'll be badgering you. ^.^
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Sorry if what I have typed down is confusing.... (I have a seriously lacking in English vocabulary XD)
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(i wonder is that my fic being confusing is the reason why ppl stop reading them.+_+)
maybe it's confusing becoz i'm still yet to go into detail what's going on within Night City, man i'm not so sure about it myself.+++++++++
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yes yes.. I think so too ^__^
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ARGH pt 3'll be a torture too!>
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vampires, lycanthropes, changelings, minor demons like incubii
OMFG...this idea sounds good to me, i still haven't figured out what kind of residents should the Night City has...thax for ur idea!!!*hugs*
though the region where Shinya's residing is a "safer" area within Night City...which mean the demons who live there are far much tamed than those wild things....and those really violenct demons won't show up all the time.^^
mummmm...maybe i should get my YM back in order to chat to u...XDDD
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Yes yes! you should get YM! ^__^
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Your description is wonderful. >: I'm really intrigued by the whole night city scenery and seeing the different relationships between characters. ..And more of vampire Kirito sounds fun 8D
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*sweatdrops*i'm serious though.XD
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.Suku.
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