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Dec 31, 2011 19:43


I'm both sad and relieved too see this fic come to an end. There's some plot left but that's for a sequel fic I may brave to write in a few weeks or may never write. We'll see. I need a break from this fic now anyway and it's come to a nice end I think. :)

Title: 31 Trials from Hell
Rating: 18
This chapter: PG
Main Characters from: Gacktjob, Malice ( Read more... )

rating: 18, 31 trials from hell, gacktjob, gackt x kami, malice mizer

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leifang666 December 31 2011, 20:30:35 UTC
Yes but Mana wasn't bullied for once!

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leifang666 December 31 2011, 20:33:27 UTC
someone else got to be the villain for a change

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shyone05 January 1 2012, 05:48:25 UTC
I really wanted to comment on each chap. but just couldn't find the time. So-- this was quite the epic undertaking, my dear. You really took a huge chance and pulled it off quite successfully, I think. Your choice of characters was really good. I really liked Chirolyn- he was a total surprise for me...
And Kozi as the ultimate villian, who would have imagined? Although his demise seemed a bit rushed. And Eneru the ultimate weapon, yay Ener!
Good job all around, hon. I really hope you come back with a sequel--after a much deserved break, of course. :)

& Happy New Year to you :D

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leifang666 January 1 2012, 13:52:28 UTC
Yeah I almost gave up around chapter 26 and wrote a few oneshots to finish the challenge but I knew if I did that i'd never finish so i pushed myself.

As for the battle scene. Yeah it was a bit rushed but part of me just wanted it over and done with and another sucks at writing battle scenes.

I should work on that ne?

And i think there will be a sequel in a week of so. I have a week off work starting the 9th so it'll probably be around then. I don't think the sequel is going to be even half as long. just enough to get through Ragnarok. It's not even planned out yet so I can't say much.

Just there will be some old characters returning, and some new. XD

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lule_4ever_not January 1 2012, 08:24:33 UTC
Since I am a sucker for happy endings this was totally awesome and it suited me perfect!
<3

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leifang666 January 1 2012, 13:52:44 UTC
you know I almost always write happy endings XD

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love_teddies January 2 2012, 09:02:07 UTC
this is my comment. sorry for not commenting for all the chapters as i did not have the time. there are so many december challenge i have not read yet but i decided to complete this first as it is really a page turner though surprised on how fast kozi's death was. it was just too fast, not enough to pay for all his sins upon gackt and kami. eneru should have rip every flesh from him and feast on him.

but anyway IT IS A GREAT FIC, with all the characters. its nice if there is a sequel but i know you too dont have the time

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leifang666 January 2 2012, 11:08:01 UTC
It's ok. Chapter 31 is the most important to comment and you did comment a few along the way.

I'm glad you liked it :)

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manalover January 4 2012, 16:27:20 UTC
that was...the strangest ending...ever...

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leifang666 January 4 2012, 19:11:50 UTC
in a good or bad way?

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manalover January 4 2012, 19:37:33 UTC
both XD i think the battle could have been longer but it was still...sweet and i liked it

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