Haunting (Part 3)

[vampiremadonna]

Title: Haunting
Author: VampireMadonna
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG-13
Length: Undetermined
Summary: A tragic end leads to a new beginning...

Comments

[crimson_miharu]

Aww the ending scene was really touching! I have a feeling JAejoong is gonna stop buggin Yunho the way he was before and will begin to get to know the REAL Jung Yunho...the one no one else really knows anything about.

[phinea2009]

Jae doesn't really have it in him to be a vengeful ghost. He's just too soft hearted. I'm looking forward to reading how Yunho falls for Jae.

[sosona69]

Hmm.. why is it the only person that can see Jae is Yunho? Therefore, you said that Jae isn't transparent like some regular ghost in tv..

Oh, and I think adding monologue would make it creepier.
(just a suggestion)

[vampiremadonna]

It's not supposed to be creepy... Jae is a ghost but this isn't a horror fic by any stretch of the imagination.

[sosona69]

Oh, I see..

I thought you made this fic with genre horror.
Cuz i remember feeling chill when i read chap 2 -with Jae suddenly popped out from nowhere and giving yun a ghostly-blowjob..
(yumm..)

And somehow you build this.. tension-like-horror feeling in the previous chap. So, I'm sorry if I got the wrong idea of your fic.
I hope you're not feel bothered by my comment.

Any way, keep up the good work. And I love your fics.. <33

[vampiremadonna]

It's okay. Glad you enjoy my stuff. Thanks for commenting.
And who knows? Maybe I WILL write a horror fic one day :)

[n3uromanc3r]

The beginning with Jae as he looked at the people around his dying body and how he looked at his mourning mother was so touching.

I wonder how will he make Yunho fall in love with him...

I can't wait for the next chapter!

<3

[mcarol85]

A poignant end to the chapter.. Can't imagine what comes next ;)