Serving 5: Chapter 11 - "Seunghyun has Difficulties"

May 18, 2009 20:21

Title: "Seunghyun has Difficulties"
Series: Serving 5
Author: Vangelynn
Rating: G
Pairings: DaeRi and TopRi
Genre: Un-attempted Humor
Chapter Summary: Seungri enjoyed detention, Jiyong interferes with Sarah's plan to improve Seunghyun's date problems, and Daesung is neglected.
Diclaimer: I own all other characters but Big Bang.
A/N: First ever fan ( Read more... )

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vangelynn May 20 2009, 13:36:43 UTC
SPOT for orenjimaru

Maru-unni, it's easy to control the font size ^_^ Even engraved_16 was asking me. Just make an html tag similar to the same one you use to bold and strike and add "font size=#sizehere" inside the brackets. Make sure you add a closing tag with "/font" . Easy peasy =D

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orenjimaru May 20 2009, 19:29:52 UTC
I'M HERE! :D
Thanks for telling me dongsaeng, you can expect to see your page flooded with weird font sizes from now on HAHA.

Oh dear, Seungri can be really scary sometimes. Why is he doing maths in the middle of the night?! :O:O:O
Yay for Daedae saving Sarang, and for the little bit of DaeRang :)

MASSIVE ROFLMAO @ the date preparation battle. Which Seungri won, out of all the people in the house. I knew that boy doesnt only steal people's clothes heh. And as a reward he got to mess around with Seunghyun's hair! How good's that!
But then after that he got his ickle heart shattered :(
*bops Seunghyun on the head*

AND WHY DOES SEUNGHYUN REMIND ME OF RAIN IN SANGDOO LETS GO TO SCHOOL?? Well, apart from the fact that Rain knew how to deal with women very well in that drama He's like a freaking male escort or gigolo! Poor Seungri would promptly die if he saw, oh dear ( ... )

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vangelynn May 20 2009, 20:25:57 UTC
oh dears, I'm in for it...

First he's cute and now he's scary. The Maknae's so versatile ^_^

*rubs Seunghyun's bopp-ed head soothingly* Well, it wouldn't be interesting if Sarah went through with her plan and Seunghyun would never see the light of day again if he went out with Ji's choice XD

Gigolo?! O_O *googles* Ahhh...now I know what you mean ^0^ Yes, it makes you cringe every time you hear her say.. "Dearie" =P

*manages to give you cracker while trying to escape glomp*

~ <3 you for reading

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orenjimaru May 20 2009, 22:25:46 UTC
Oh yes you are MUAHAHA.

Yay for versatile maknae! :D:D

Heh yes I see your point, and I'm not complaining about your choice of plot, on the contrary I thought it was really funny heh.

I hope Seunghyun's not doing anything like that...*gulp*
Awwww someone doesnt like being glomped :(
*grabs cracker anyway*
xxx

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vangelynn May 20 2009, 13:39:10 UTC
And also a SPOTtage for Mai, because she wanted one =P

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haelin May 20 2009, 14:27:02 UTC
SPOT FOR MYSELF AS WELL.. LOOOOOL!

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yourmyfantasy May 20 2009, 15:41:10 UTC
SPOTSPOTSPOT!

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yourmyfantasy May 20 2009, 15:57:50 UTC
OHHHHMAHGOSH! THIS WAS GREEEATTTT <3
HEHEHEH!

Seunghyun sighed as Sarah asked him to turn around once more. This was exactly how he felt like back in his High School days when his Noona would dress him up for parties and dances that he ended up not going to anyway. No one dated him back then because of his ‘chubbiness’.

!!!!!!! WHATT?! T-T NOOOO. HE WAS STILL CUTEEEEEEE. D:
*pats tops head* at least your hot now, hehehe! LOL.

Seungri, who was now forlorn and forgotten, got up to leave, completely upset that he had just helped Seunghyun out with one of the things he despised the most. There was no Desung-hyung to comfort him, which just made the boy more heavy hearted.

D: SEUNGRI-AHH! I CAN TOTALLY UNDERSTAND HOW MAKNAE FEELS T-T
sighhhh. Nevermind ri. ); dae would be back soon! *hugs ri*

“Oh!” The Woman clapped her hands together gently. “I was going to order the same thing. It was delicious. You have good taste, Seunghyun ( ... )

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yourmyfantasy May 20 2009, 15:59:43 UTC
OOPS, I MEAN,

this was so good*

x:x:

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vangelynn May 20 2009, 17:54:11 UTC
Gaaah~ To hey with waiting until tomorrow to read my comments XD I didn't even post yesterday.

I agree ^_^ I saw TOP's old high school pictures. He was so cute XD

Well *looks around* She's not really that old..Maybe around middle 30's? OHMAHGOSH! O_O That is old!

Goo, Good, same thing =P They're all love to meh >.<

~ <3 you for reading

I'll get to your series soon =D. Just gotta finish a few assignments!

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noizstarlove May 20 2009, 16:42:38 UTC
Ok - have to admit, I am one of the silent readers >.<

Although, that's soly beause I think I stink at comments. Anyways, I really enjoy your story, I always look for an update, and the jirah is straight crack for me. I always try to guess what will happen next for them, and the outcome is always so much more interesting and funny than what I expected.

I can't wait for more, and I hope you get better soon. I just got over a cold, took two days of nitequil, while I was off, and was better in no time.

I would quote some of my fav. lines, but im using my cell to comment, so that would be hard to do right now... >.< anyways get bbetter soon! I will be looking forward to see how Seunhyun's date ends.

Seunhyun, don't give up, your too cool for that!

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vangelynn May 20 2009, 18:00:57 UTC
8D Whoo!hoo! I'm psychic!

Thanks for the advice ^_^ I feel a whole lot better now.

Yes, JiRah is straight crack both ways. oh gosh, that sounded so bad X_x I mean it's straight forward crack and at the same time a straight pairing ^_^

HOWTHEHECKDOYOUDOTHAT??!! I can't even text my own name on a cell phone more so write a comment T_T

And don't worry about stinking at comments. I spazz for a minute when I receive a simple comment like this-> "OMG i <3 dis fic! prs continue!!!! <3333333"

~ <3 you for reading

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