analytical writing? screw YOU.

[vanilla_alia]

I'm not sure where the line between fanfic and analysis really goes, so I wrote a paper on a fanfic! wow!

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Really though, I did. Below the cut is my analytical piece on sobrellevar's piece Quiet is the New Loud (I Will Follow You Into the Dark). I picked it mostly because it is a good length and it's friendly across the worlds of fanfic and English class

Comments

[slipsandtangles]

the last paragraph of your analysis is pretty much the same reaction i have every time i read 'quiet is the new loud'. i love it so much that even have it saved as a text-file on my ipod. your writing is beautiful, as always. ♥

[vanilla_alia]

yes! I was hoping to capture that because I remember the very first time I read it and wow, it's hard to put into words. It's so incredible, and it was the first piece of fob fanfic that i had ever read

awww, thank you! I'm glad you read it!

[sobrellevar]

!!!!

i don't even know what to say! it's such a huge compliment to see my writing affect anyone in such a way. thank you.

Unfortunately for the girl, she never gets her wake-up call. Fortunately for Pete, he does.

i like the way you phrase things, it's very wry. astute!

although, this is a new experience. i have NEVER in my life shown any of my writing to my teachers, hahaha. so to hear that some teacher somewhere has read my bandslash is. uh. new! :P

[vanilla_alia]

I'm so jazzed you're cool with this. My paper was late and I had to decide on what I wanted to do and I just ran with this. So I'm glad you liked this and thank you for your kind words> :)

heheh, to be fair, I did have to take out like, the second to last sentence I think, about kissing. My english teacher is awesome, but idk, still very bashful about the whole deal. But he really did enjoy it! and I got a really really (really really) good grade on this essay (and he's a tough grader!)