Ayame's Sexy Revenge (NC-17, PWP, Hatoyame)

[vanilla_ofuda]

Title: Ayame's Sexy Revenge
Series: Fruits Basket
Pairing: Hatoyame
Genre: PWP, smut
Rating: NC-17 
A/N: FOR MYSELF, DAMMIT. Because I always wanted to make a PWP. I think I still failed seeing as it has so many words... o___o;;; BUT OH WELL. For

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[karro]

OHOHOHO pr0n! I loooved this^__^ TOTEMO LOVE!! I'm glad Hatori gave in and OMG Ayame is so annoying and noisy XDDD *loves still*

... but who writes fiction for "THEMSELF, DAMN IT," woman XDD? ♥

[vanilla_ofuda]

Ahaha, I know, it ended up being 3400 something words, and I was like o____0;;;; "Well I'll just blame it on Ayame's ramblings ahahaha 8D;;;" I swear, whenever I write conversation, Ayame's conversation just comes out so smoothly... I think I should be disturbed that it's that easy for me to produce insanity. o_o;;; Ayame's a sweetheart, really, he's not annoying at all XD (This coming from the person who has him in brain for 24/7)

FOR WHO SHOULD I WRITE PORN IF NOT FOR MYSELF? XD

[karro]

Of course XDDDD But hey pr0n can be long XDDD It's just not PWP anymore^_^ Nooooo, I love Ayame too, and you are very right, he's not annoying at all he just cracks me up all the time XDDD But don't teall Hatori I said that 'cause I love him too and someone has to sympathize with him XDD

WELL WELL YOU COULD, LIKE, SAY IT WAS FOR ME AND NOT SAY IT WAS FOR ME, SORT OF! XDD

[vanilla_ofuda]

xDDD PSH, I am doing Furubathon right now, and I am at episode 9... I just had the infamous Hatori/Kana episode. HATORI DOESN'T NEED SYMPATHY, HE JUST NEEDS SOME SEX. XD

IT WAS SUPPOSED TO BE FOR YOU BUT THEN YOU DIDN'T WATCH TB SO THEN IT WASN'T FOR YOU ANYMORE DX
Do you love Dietrich noooow? 8D

[raikune]

8D That was HAWT. And Aya named the dildo Hatori LAWLZ. Hari needed some good sexin' to stop him mopin', YAY.

[vanilla_ofuda]

Hatori-mental-scarring is just about the funnest thing you could do in smut with him in it~ XD So easy, too ♥

HE SURE DOES. Stop waiting for true love, but bring on teh sex yesh. X3

[speaky_bean]

Commenting here so I don't have to do it in capslock. XD

Anyway this was most excellent. I'm sorry it took a while to read, I didn't really wanna finish it 'til I'd be able to comment--my lappy only lets me comment on things when IT wants me to, and I'm on my school's computer now...anyway.

You did a great job, especially characterizing Ayame. He's your favorite, so I guess that makes him easier to write--I know I can't write him for crap. You seemed to be having a little more trouble with Hatori, it's HARD to write him doing these things and have it still feel like him. But you still did a really good job. The whole set-up was hilarious, and I like the reference to the fact that Hari masturbates! XD That added the spark of realism this needed! All in all, awesome fic, and thanks for putting it on the comm! U RITEZ GR8 PRON!!11 XD

[speaky_bean]

What about Shigure with his 'I love little girls! schtick? And Haru's going on about like...molesting Tohru or something in Episode 10. (I am watching FB again in order to show it to my boyfreind right now, so it's fresh in the old brain. And um...yeah most of them don't have much of a sex drive, I guess so it can be rating appropriate for a younger crowd, but it's still creepy. (And seriously, is a psychotic child whipping his cousin more appropriate then said cousin maybe thinking he'd like to bang somebody later in life?)

[sylc]

ROTFL! This is so much CRACK!! XDDDD A dildo named Tori-san... XDDDD Shigure's voice getting more perverted... XDDDD So funny! Aww. Thanks for making me laugh. ♥♥

[oh_niisan]

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*thud* Holy jesus. I'll be in my bunk.

[generationxwing]

Very, very good.

Your fics are amazing.