Cold

[vanillaflair]

Title: Cold
Author: vanillaflair
Chapter: drabble
Pairing: Yoosu
Rating: g
Warning: none
Disclaimer: Don't own these guys.
A/N: First drabble. I hope it was okay. I would love to have some constructive comments. Thank you. Oh and this is for Dinar dearie. <333

Comments

[krissylovessu]

awww..
chocolate cookies for you!!!
(^-^)

[vanillaflair]

aw first comment, thank you ♥

[lovemickyuchun]

this was cute. short, simple and sweet :)

just fix some of your verbs tenses, like shooked should be shook, and grinned should be grin. also, something about the last sentence bothers me, it just seems abruptly placed there so it sounds out of place. but other than that i really liked this drabble, for me it was good for your first one :D <3

[vanillaflair]

ooohh thanks for pointing it out? i hadnt realised. D: i'll change it soon ^^

and thank you for the comment~~, i will try to improve on less abrupt endings in the future <33

[aleemin]

overload cuteness!

[jihae_shii]

cuddling yoosu is ♥

[ting5]

sweet loving Yoosu ^^