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arliss August 6 2014, 15:51:46 UTC
Fic from you! How lovely! And Boyd fic, at that. This is a nice character piece, set against an easily identifiable background. I have been to that fair, and that odor is easily recalled. I like this a lot.

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vanillafluffy August 6 2014, 22:55:05 UTC
Thanks! The prompt caught my attention; it seems like that's the only fic writing I do any more....

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karaokegal August 13 2014, 18:59:57 UTC
Great voices! I love your Boyd so much. Perfectly in character. I could totally see this playing out as a scene in the show.

Psst...couple of typos:
Baring his deployment, (should be "barring")

That's a hell of a think (should be "thing")

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vanillafluffy August 13 2014, 20:12:02 UTC
Thanks, hon! Boyd is my favorite character ever to write dialog for, because he's charming and loquacious and he's got the vocabulary and uses it, and if his audience can't keep up, too bad. (Usually when I'm writing Boyd, I just let the Walton Goggins in my head talk, and try to keep up.)
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