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[vanillapudding5]

So more than a month ago, I replied to a meme on chopsticknoodle's journal - a 'give me a fandom, I'll give you a character, and you'll write me comment-fic' sort of thing.

I gave her FNL, she gave me Tim, and I never wrote anything.

GUESS WHOSE FAULT THAT WAS?

Anyway, so last night I was going through my writing folder, and found a half-finished something that I

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[graceless_love]

Oh. My. Gosh. This is just so perfect. There are not even words to describe how much I love this piece :) I really feel like I crawled inside Tim's head in this one and got a deeper look at all the undercurrents going on in this scene. You've managed to effortlessly capture all of the character's personalities and magnify them into something better. I really hope you keep writing fic, especially FNL because this is one of the most well written pieces I've ever seen :)

[vanillapudding5]

That right there's an amazing comment. I'm all excited about it. ;D

Thanks!

[rachel_wilder]

This was just gorgeous. Really, really wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your FNL stories.

[vanillapudding5]

Thanks so much! :)

[shelbecat]

I really liked this. It was nice to get inside Tim's head, especially towards the end, and "see" his thoughts as he approached Jay. I also really liked the description of the nurse in the hospital. It's like Tim can't face going in the room, so he picks up on insignificant details surrounding him - anything to avoid having to go and see Jason.

Very, very nice.

[vanillapudding5]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[1407graymalkin]

Gorgeous.

Beautiful.

*sniffle*

I like how this is from Tim's perspective of all three of them. <3

[vanillapudding5]

Thanks! :)