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[vanillastwist]

Comp professor had said my (20 page)research paper was of journal quality... but sociolgy professor is a beee-ich, and refuses to see more than 5 pages... i cropped it to hell, and will take major deductions in grade because of the fact i went over the limit on works cited butttt oh well...

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[polydad]

You present good information, but don't do a rigorous job of making your case. Not surprising; that's a much harder job.

Did you work from an outline? If so, do you still have it and could I take a look at it?

best,

Joel

[vanillastwist]

No outline, and n case to be made... bottom line was to research the issue, form an opinion, and keep the information under 5 pages (part of why there is no *case*) and scoot it along to the wicked witches inbox...

[polydad]

Okay. There seems to be an implied case, that it'd be worthwhile to try to bring out in the open. Big job; I'll try to take a swing at it, but not this week.

Looking forward now to *working* with you as well as hopefully eventually *playing* with you (Possibly both at the same time? "If your edit's not done by tomorrow night, fifty lashes!"),

hugs,

Joel

[vanillastwist]

i actually have about 20 pages written, comp professor is proofing it now, seems to believe its journal quality...