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vanishinghope

Please State Your Name.Country Of Origin, US Uitizen?Reason For Travel:Business Or Pleasure?Thankyou

Jan 21, 2006 17:08

Nathan Hodges ( Read more... )

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vanishinghope January 21 2006, 14:10:11 UTC

this is very unlike my other writings but i wanted to try and play with story writing more than just describing my emotions. so this is more like a non-dark story i felt like writing to amuse myself until i see chelsea next. let me know what you think

amazing as always vanishinghope January 22 2006, 09:03:31 UTC

that was awesome. that IS very different from your other writings, but yet still VERY amazing as always. how long does it take you to write things like this ethan? all the details and everything just puts a perfect picture of what is going on in my head. i can see it and with most authors lately they can not explain things like you do in your writing. i love you.

chelsea

Re: amazing as always vanishinghope January 25 2006, 19:36:03 UTC

thankyou so much my dearest!!! its so wonderfully getting comments about my writing from you! cuz youre an incredible writer yourself my dear. and umm this took me maybe about 3ish hours i think to write.....

stripteaseheart January 22 2006, 10:30:11 UTC

you should take short fiction at my school, she has us write and you'd be amazing.

you know already, you've read mine.

vanishinghope January 25 2006, 19:41:45 UTC

i wish i could!! you need to let me read everything you write in that class-cuz i love your writing my dear!

stripteaseheart January 26 2006, 19:26:14 UTC

the class is over - you've read it.

ha. we'll see what comes out of poetry, though?
i wrote one yesterday.

vanishinghope January 29 2006, 17:58:06 UTC

ok that works!

balletbabe911 January 25 2006, 17:30:37 UTC

um yeah i pretty much loved this!!! Like seriously i really enjoyed it...haha it was unpredictable like i had no idea where it was going when i started and then it confused me cuz what i thought was going to happen didn't....haha definately write more!!! ILOVEYOU!!!!

vanishinghope January 25 2006, 19:39:24 UTC

haha wow!!!!! ok i cant tell you how happy that just made me!!!!!! cuz thats the exact thing i was hoping would happen! yay!! my story worked!!! lol seriously though thankyou for telling me that cuz i can never tell with my writing if im hinting enough at events to get you to believe one thing before i change it and twist it with unpredictableness....one of the annoying things about writing the story...i know whats going to happen so i wont be surprised...oh well thanx again! and i love you too!

rouge3033 January 27 2006, 20:11:56 UTC

Hi I'm still reading this as I'm writing so idk what I think of it yet but it sounds good so far. So as I go, these are my thoughts ( ... )

vanishinghope February 5 2006, 11:33:41 UTC

so yeah i had a long comment back but it got deleted so i just told you what it said cuz i didnt feel like typing at all back out. but heres a comment back so you dont feel commentless

wow! thenewspielburg February 2 2006, 16:26:34 UTC

that was really good! to be honest i wasnt' gonna read it, but how can a story be anything but excellent when its written by ethan and its second line is talking about the greatest country in the world!

really. excellent job on this

let's hang out soon!

Lukas

Re: wow! vanishinghope February 5 2006, 11:32:54 UTC

haha thankyou!!! that makes my heart smile. we should hang out very soon.