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Aug 22, 2010 23:47

 As I was recently encouraged to actually use my LJ account I will now attempt to post one of my early NCIS stories, primarily as it is short and therefore should be easy to do. We'll see.

Thanks to fredsmith518 for the help!!!!

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ncis fic

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fredsmith518 August 22 2010, 23:42:14 UTC
delighted you got this figured out
his emotions were too close to the surface. He should really go home but he couldn’t bear the thought of being alone right now.

Funny how you could hold it together when the pressure was on but then you just fell apart afterwards.
very much like these lines
very much like Abby's interactions with Tony, very in character, also that Gibbs thinks and doesn't say, also very in character

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vanishingp2000 August 23 2010, 07:43:37 UTC
Thanks very much and thanks for your help too!!!
I'm delighted that you liked the story, I wrote it ages ago but most of my stories are multi-chaptered and I have yet to work out the links LOL. I like writing Abby and Tony, as I think we mentioned at the weekend, they have an understanding of each other and an acceptance which I love.

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fredsmith518 August 24 2010, 21:42:20 UTC

cheekymice August 24 2010, 06:58:02 UTC
Ahhhh, you incorporated all my favorite things in this fic!

Whumped Tony, concerned Gibbs and emotional Tony.

I am one happy bunny right now.

And may I say that it's wonderful to see you over here!

*mwah*

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vanishingp2000 August 24 2010, 08:04:09 UTC
Thank you very much! As you know those are pretty much my favourite things too LOL. So hard to write without hurting the poor man.

I'm very glad to be here, properly, at last.

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