The Chase

May 29, 2010 08:43

Title: The Chase

Author: shasha717

Pairing: Junseung / slight Dooseob Kiwoon and other couples

Rating: PG-13

Summary: Hyunseung woke up from a hangover with a sleeping stranger in his apartment..

A/N: My second fic, inspired by Grey's Anatomy.

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dooseob, junseung, kiwoon

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firebirdie May 29 2010, 09:33:41 UTC
Owwww~
I smiled like crazy everytime I read each paragraph.
This is so good!
Really love your AU <3333333
I love this!!
Sequel? That'll be wonderful! ^w^
Yay!! Good job! XDD

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vanissa717 May 30 2010, 11:46:04 UTC
baby you're so kind! ^^
thank you for reading and commenting! *showering loves on you*
I'm scared that you all will be disappointed if I wrote a sequel lol
glad that I can make you smile :D

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akinoyui May 29 2010, 10:41:04 UTC
woot!!! Daebak!!another good one from you!!!

i dont find it to be too many couples / people... I actually like (and approve) all those couples...wahahahha...

Hyunseung was like, playing hard to catch and i kept laughing whenever junhyung called hyunseung into his office because of his little petty mistakes...

and YES to sequel!!!!!!!!!!! Oh pls pls pls pls!!!! I beg of you!!!!

lastly....poor hyunah....perhaps she should go with sohyun...wahahahhaa....poor seungho too though (i do like him ^^)

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vanissa717 May 30 2010, 11:49:16 UTC
aaaw you're too kind to me bb! >A<
well I was gonna cut the G.O-cheondoong couple but my lil sis insisted not to lol ^^
yes! all the couples are good, I actually liked joon-seungho than joon-mir but I can't pair up my seungho with anyone! *evil laughs*
ironically I'm so mean to all my fave characters... T___T (like hyunah and seungho)
thanks for reading and commenting bb! ^^
you make me so happy with ur comment! :D

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vaneszikkipower May 29 2010, 10:56:10 UTC
Smiling so much right now!!!
LOVED LOVED this!
Hyunseung throwing away Junhyung just after their night, lol!!
And Junhyung being his boss and asking him in his office often lol.
Besides, There's some of my favorit OTP here :)

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vanissa717 May 30 2010, 11:52:02 UTC
I'm glad it made you smile! ^^
I'm a learning writer so good feedback is definitely pumping me up! lol *gets bricked*
I made my seungie a lil bit too sarcastic here...
thanks for reading and commenting bb :D
my fave OTP is the main pair! :D:D

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naichu May 29 2010, 12:08:51 UTC
omo, I loved this. Really made me smile ♥

It's like all my fave pairings of these bands got thrown together, lol 8D

I like your AUs!
And yes, a sequel please *-*~

Meming this <3

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vanissa717 May 30 2010, 11:54:06 UTC
I'm glad it made you smile bb! <33
yeay to OTPs! :D
thankyou for reading and commenting babe *attempts hug*
I'll try to work on the sequels, everything is just too cramped out now -__-'
anw thnks bb! <3

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yunsias May 29 2010, 12:56:22 UTC
Seungho, you can go out with me! XD

Anyway, the boss seducing the subordinate lmao. But I like the sweet end to this.

"So, this line of yours... Is it imaginary or I'm gonna have to give you a marker?"
Junhyung is such a sleaze-ball haha.

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vanissa717 May 30 2010, 11:56:11 UTC
noooo! seungho is mine! *evil laughs*
you see I was in dilemma to make a joon-mir or a joon-seungho
though I liked joon-seungho better, I can't make my seungho to pair with anyone!
so... there you go! lol
to be honest, I wasn't very satisfied with the end... but I'm glad you liked it! :D
thnks for reading n commenting bb! <3

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