Coincidence

[vanissa717]

Title: Coincidence

Author: shasha717

Pairing: Junseung, slight Kiwoon

Rating: PG-13

Summary: Hyunseung found himself attracted to the newcomer, Yong Junhyung.

A/N: My first one-shot ever!

Comments

[vanissa717]

lol thankyou for reading and commenting! :)
and yes that was one of my favorite lines in the story. the most cheesy too I must say. *say yeay to cheesiness* \(^v^)/

[his_angel16]

my spot...haha, i'll be back to read after my nephew has his fill of jumping on the trampoline.

[vaneszikkipower]

Junseung!!!YEEEEEEEEEs!!!
Ah that first night of love sooo cute.
TOP did not get the right part... Poor Hyunsuengie...

LOL to Yoseob way f intriducing people to each other!
And LOL to Kikwang lol, this one is just so hot and cute...
Ah Junhyung so romantic, bridal style :)
<3333

Please write more Junseung, loved this :)

[vanissa717]

lol I feel bad for the VIPs as I always makes TOP as the antagonist (ironically he's my fave member in Bigbang but I keep picking on him)

thankyou babe for loving this and I love you for it! ^^ *attempts hug*

[vaneszikkipower]

***answers the hug :)***

[ttaejoong_hyuk]

kyaaaaa!!!! oh goshers!!! with the supreme lack of visual junhyung the only things i can turn to are fanfics and djkfalhkja gaaah i love this!!!! hits the spot!!!! ahahahaha, it's so cute and just gaaaaah.....junseuuuuung!!!! goshers top is just aldja graaaah bad in here but whooot whooot junhyung to make hyunseungie better!!! lololol, kiwoon is hilarious and gaaah, princess hyunseung!!! it's really fitting....ahaha

[vanissa717]

lol at you spazzing on junseung :D
and yes our OTPs have been cheating on each other lately and I wrote this up just to make me happy and still clinging on my junseung; despite all of the cheating we've seen

for me, kiwoon and princess seungie is just adorable!

thankyou for reading and commenting ^^

[ttaejoong_hyuk]

lol yes!!! cling we must if we want junseung to survive!!! slowly and steadily they'll go back to each other lol

[akinoyui]

your first??? i gotta say, it's amazing!! great job!

i actually like long oneshot fics..hehe..especially one as interesting as this one..

there are a few minor mistakes, but it's alright...it's still understandable...

write more!! then you'll get the hang of it..and the flow of your stories will get better!!!!

i'm soooooooo looking forward to your next one (if you plan to do more ^^ which I hope you do ..hehehee)

[vanissa717]

thank you babe! <33 *showering loves on you*
I've been afraid cause my oneshot just seemed like an on-going one

point it out and I'll edit them. kekeke. because english is not my first language so... there you go!

I am indeed working on the next one but again, it seems it will be another long oneshot fics. lol

thankyouuuuu~! as you can see I'm a learning writer so I hope to write more and improve myself ^^ and again thanks for reading and commenting :)

[akinoyui]

*throws confetti*

hahahhaa....

“Now, that’s the smile is the one I’ve been wanting to see all night.” Junhyung said while pinching Hyunseung’s cheek.

Perhaps you mean "Now, that's the smile I've been wanting to see all night" (???? O.o not that my English is THAT good either...heheheheeh)

I think it's my 3rd (or 4th?? coz it's sooo sweet!!!) time reading... ^^

In my honest opinion, I think you used interesting words to describe something, be it their reactions, expressions , surroundings, things, etc...

ok.I think I better stop now..hahhaha...if not I'll go on forever!

Don't make me wait too long for the next one!!!

[vanissa717]

>>"Now, that's the smile I've been wanting to see all night"
hey I wanted to write that! how does the other come out?? O.o

why did you stop? I love feedbacks!

awww thank you for reading it many times baby! <33
*blushing from your compliments* lol

I hope to write soon too ^^